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Lucky Wilshire
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 |  Subject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration Thu Mar 31, 2016 8:55 am | |
| Kamina
Well,done! That was beautifully described. I could clearly picture the dojo and got a sense of its history along with the sense of history and ritual between master and apprentice (very cute dynamic). Few people are able to describe combat as succinctly as that (sometimes its just a garble of activity,but this was clear-cut and defined: like I was watching it!). There were barely noticeable spelling slip ups, but that's hardly anything against your pluses, here. My only real disappointment was that her master was not literally a "lizard hermit". I was picturing the tail and the tongue and everything! XS Anyway, this was a splendid sample for character, setting and combat alike. I feel somewhat remiss for not being able to award this some sort of title (we could really use another playable Warlord, hint hint  ),but if that's really what you want I can just give you the levels (and if you wanted the bounty/reputation as well, let me know). I really enjoyed this regardless.+40 levels | |
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| | Subject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration Wed Jun 15, 2016 9:59 am | |
| Crew: N/A Position: Warlord Tier: TBD (To be determined) Activity: On/Off but hopefully more active now. Why: I feel like I could contribute both a lot to the active storyline with the help of the administration and through character development with new players and currently active ones from long ago. All in all I want to bring a layer of depth to the story we're all trying to create here as well as try to bring something new to the table in terms of character! Sample: - The Arrival (1,492 WC):
somethings just fade away Crimson eyes set upon the world around him, a singular notion of acknowledgement for the reality that was coming back into focus. Droplets of blood fell off the end of his blade and he could feel himself coming back down from rage that beset him into the onslaught of pirate bodies all around him. He could begin to finally remember the course of events and the reason why both his blade and his white attire was tainted red with the clinging liquid of life that pooled beneath them like mirrors. A breath rung free and he closed his eyes - remembering.
The day was bright, a sunny forecast over the seas with nearly no clouds in sight - Carmine had been invited to become a Warlord by The World Government as a means of putting his intense power with his nodachi to the use in bettering the world, however that was obviously just a facade. They feared him for what he could do and the power that he held in his reflexes and strikes, they didn't want him wandering the globe unsupervised by their eyes, too afraid that one day he'd come to them with his blade pointed at their hearts instead.
No matter, Carmine had already resigned himself to the idea of joining the Shichibukai, it would allow him to do as he pleased somewhat without the minor brigands of the Marines easing themselves into the way of his path to becoming Pirate King. His bounty of course would remain halted or at the very least increase based differently by his actions until he'd do something to become a full pledged pirate again but he was content at the moment with the rather large one he had already accrued over the years. If it meant stabilizing it then he was satisfied.
The waves crashed up against the sides of his singular boat, it was more of a raft than anything else yet worked finer than some other's seacrafts would - it was reliable on getting him where he needed to go and even if it should break, he had no fear of the water depths below him. That was the difference between most men and women and Carmine these days, so many had forsaken themselves to the fate of the Cursed Fruits but he had figured life would be better to tread with the ability to swim and know the ocean's embrace.
His eyes turn from the flickering dancing lights of the water onto the sky above him, it seemed that the weather cast was wrong, there was the beginnings of a storm brewing just over the horizon nearing the island he was supposed to be meeting with the Marine Officials on - not that it would be too much of a problem, merely an inconvenience than anything else. A sigh clipped from his lips and he would arrive at the beach of the island, stepping off the sea vessel and kicking down the wooden spike that would keep it bound to land.
With the boat in it's steady lock with the ground, Carmine could begin walking towards the town on the island. That would be a journey short-lived though as a cannonball slammed down against the sand in front of him, knocking him to slide back against the shoreline again and turn his head to gaze at the sea. Another pirate ship had followed him all the way here? It seemed to be none other than one of the more higher crews of the seas, no doubt aiming to seek revenge of Carmine's betrayal to their life as Pirates in him becoming a Shichibukai.
The ship docked partly onto the sands, men and women of all different races, jobs and more landed off the side of it's hull, snickering and laughing at the red-eyed man in their overzealous nature, believing their victory would be assured. The Captain was the last one off the ship, ironic seeing as normally they are the first to leap into danger - whatever the case may be, this wasn't something that Carmine had wished to deal with today of all days but it was an inevitability that some would be satisfied with his choice to truce with the Marines.
"I've been looking for you, Carmine D. Snow! Heh heh, been thinkin' how much of a dog y'are t'join with those oppressing men of the law, I'm sure ol' Azure would be disappointed t'see where ye are t'day, no? How on earth did someone related to that broad 'erself become such a miserable shell of a man? Willin' t'sell his soul t' the Government fer hire? Well I'll be doin' the world a favor by riddin' ya!" Berso, the name of the Captain was a man easily scrutable by the fact he only ever cared about fame and riches.
"You believe in a world of freedom, I believe in it too however they offered me a good deal and I aim to take it - if you get in my way that would be no one's fault but your own. I'd rather not have to kill someone so well known that could prove to be a useful ally one day, if you take a step towards me now though - I will." Carmine was no man that'd bluff, he was too forthright to do something like that, so when his hand came to rest upon the handle of his blade - it was a promise, not a threat.
"Wahahaha! What a joke! Get'm you lot!" Berso called out to his crew, rallying them into their cruel fate, Carmine was relaxed and simply assumed the position of his style, bringing his knees to a slight crouch and hand hovering above the nodachi's handle. As each man and woman came close, he'd draw his blade and jolt by their sides with a pivot of his legs. He wasted no breath and no moment, keeping to the unheard tempo of the battle by ending lives swiftly with cuts across the midsection, stabs to the chest in major organs and for Berso himself it would be much worse.
Only the Captain was left alive between him and his crew, the bodies of plenty heaps of human blood and flesh all around on the sandy beach, coating the once golden shore into a tide of red, cascading towards the water. Berso gulped, attempting to repent on this day for whatever sins he had on him, seeking some solace or redemption away from the fate of Carmine's sword but there was no sense of mercy left in the heart of the nodachi wielding man. A breath rung free...
His remembering was over and the droplets of rain now began to mix with the red that dripped from off the blade of his weapon, Carmine was done reminiscing how it had all come to this. One Captain and one soon to be Shichibukai, the former being the one crying and begging to live even despite having attacked the latter with no abandon for the lives of his crew. "Please I beggin' 'ere, spare me!" Berso pleaded, but those words fell on deaf eyes - Carmine simply lifted his blade and pressed it onto Berso's chest, speaking clear as the day had been before all of this.
"Your death will be the slowest - for you condemned the lives of your own crew when you told them to attack me, I gave you a way out.. the doors are shut for you now, so give my regards to the Demons in Hell.. tell them they'll be next." Red eyes, just like the fabled beasts of lore... but now they were from Carmine and they watched the terrible fate of Berso as the nodachi's blade pierced the flesh and slowly, painfully, traveled it's way to the other man's heart, finally puncturing it and causing the man to bleed to death alongside the cut organs in it's way.
The weapon was pulled free and Berso's body slumped onto the ground, leaving another stain to the once peaceful shoreline, a pity such a beautiful day was now ruined with rain and death. It was even more regrettable that Carmine was not alone in this act as the Marine Officials had arrived to lend support in dealing with Berso as they had thought the Captain had come to terrorize the land but instead bore witness to Carmine slaughtering him for his ruthless unprovoked attack without mercy.
"Welcome to the Island, New Shichibukai - Vermilion Heir!" One of the officials called out, saluting him, no doubt afraid of what he just saw. Good, it was nice to see that even the Marines knew of fear... better to be called a coward then to die a fool like Berso. This was just the beginning though.. there was more to do as Shichibukai in this world and this action - this tale that the Marines would tell across the globe, would be Carmine's first step towards his future -- The Beginning of the End.
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| | | | Azure Snow
The Owner
Position : Marine Captain
Berries : 135,000
Posts : 1075
Skill Sheet
Skill 1: Heaven's Nodachi
Skill 2: Gun Blade Style
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| | Subject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration Wed Jun 15, 2016 7:25 pm | |
| I Absolutely Love it- It is the first of many Good tales to come, I am very Impressed and Pleased with this Character and Writing! +55 Levels [29,100 EXP]http://www.jeweledseas.com/t81-leveling-system
Bounty: 340,000,000
+'S' Class Nodachi, 'S' Class Piece of Equipmenthttp://www.jeweledseas.com/t753-weapon-and-equipment-information +One 'A' Class Chest Roll - Carmine D Snow wrote:
- Crew: N/A
Position: Warlord
Tier: TBD (To be determined)
Activity: On/Off but hopefully more active now.
Why: I feel like I could contribute both a lot to the active storyline with the help of the administration and through character development with new players and currently active ones from long ago. All in all I want to bring a layer of depth to the story we're all trying to create here as well as try to bring something new to the table in terms of character!
Sample:
- The Arrival (1,492 WC):
somethings just fade away Crimson eyes set upon the world around him, a singular notion of acknowledgement for the reality that was coming back into focus. Droplets of blood fell off the end of his blade and he could feel himself coming back down from rage that beset him into the onslaught of pirate bodies all around him. He could begin to finally remember the course of events and the reason why both his blade and his white attire was tainted red with the clinging liquid of life that pooled beneath them like mirrors. A breath rung free and he closed his eyes - remembering.
The day was bright, a sunny forecast over the seas with nearly no clouds in sight - Carmine had been invited to become a Warlord by The World Government as a means of putting his intense power with his nodachi to the use in bettering the world, however that was obviously just a facade. They feared him for what he could do and the power that he held in his reflexes and strikes, they didn't want him wandering the globe unsupervised by their eyes, too afraid that one day he'd come to them with his blade pointed at their hearts instead.
No matter, Carmine had already resigned himself to the idea of joining the Shichibukai, it would allow him to do as he pleased somewhat without the minor brigands of the Marines easing themselves into the way of his path to becoming Pirate King. His bounty of course would remain halted or at the very least increase based differently by his actions until he'd do something to become a full pledged pirate again but he was content at the moment with the rather large one he had already accrued over the years. If it meant stabilizing it then he was satisfied.
The waves crashed up against the sides of his singular boat, it was more of a raft than anything else yet worked finer than some other's seacrafts would - it was reliable on getting him where he needed to go and even if it should break, he had no fear of the water depths below him. That was the difference between most men and women and Carmine these days, so many had forsaken themselves to the fate of the Cursed Fruits but he had figured life would be better to tread with the ability to swim and know the ocean's embrace.
His eyes turn from the flickering dancing lights of the water onto the sky above him, it seemed that the weather cast was wrong, there was the beginnings of a storm brewing just over the horizon nearing the island he was supposed to be meeting with the Marine Officials on - not that it would be too much of a problem, merely an inconvenience than anything else. A sigh clipped from his lips and he would arrive at the beach of the island, stepping off the sea vessel and kicking down the wooden spike that would keep it bound to land.
With the boat in it's steady lock with the ground, Carmine could begin walking towards the town on the island. That would be a journey short-lived though as a cannonball slammed down against the sand in front of him, knocking him to slide back against the shoreline again and turn his head to gaze at the sea. Another pirate ship had followed him all the way here? It seemed to be none other than one of the more higher crews of the seas, no doubt aiming to seek revenge of Carmine's betrayal to their life as Pirates in him becoming a Shichibukai.
The ship docked partly onto the sands, men and women of all different races, jobs and more landed off the side of it's hull, snickering and laughing at the red-eyed man in their overzealous nature, believing their victory would be assured. The Captain was the last one off the ship, ironic seeing as normally they are the first to leap into danger - whatever the case may be, this wasn't something that Carmine had wished to deal with today of all days but it was an inevitability that some would be satisfied with his choice to truce with the Marines.
"I've been looking for you, Carmine D. Snow! Heh heh, been thinkin' how much of a dog y'are t'join with those oppressing men of the law, I'm sure ol' Azure would be disappointed t'see where ye are t'day, no? How on earth did someone related to that broad 'erself become such a miserable shell of a man? Willin' t'sell his soul t' the Government fer hire? Well I'll be doin' the world a favor by riddin' ya!" Berso, the name of the Captain was a man easily scrutable by the fact he only ever cared about fame and riches.
"You believe in a world of freedom, I believe in it too however they offered me a good deal and I aim to take it - if you get in my way that would be no one's fault but your own. I'd rather not have to kill someone so well known that could prove to be a useful ally one day, if you take a step towards me now though - I will." Carmine was no man that'd bluff, he was too forthright to do something like that, so when his hand came to rest upon the handle of his blade - it was a promise, not a threat.
"Wahahaha! What a joke! Get'm you lot!" Berso called out to his crew, rallying them into their cruel fate, Carmine was relaxed and simply assumed the position of his style, bringing his knees to a slight crouch and hand hovering above the nodachi's handle. As each man and woman came close, he'd draw his blade and jolt by their sides with a pivot of his legs. He wasted no breath and no moment, keeping to the unheard tempo of the battle by ending lives swiftly with cuts across the midsection, stabs to the chest in major organs and for Berso himself it would be much worse.
Only the Captain was left alive between him and his crew, the bodies of plenty heaps of human blood and flesh all around on the sandy beach, coating the once golden shore into a tide of red, cascading towards the water. Berso gulped, attempting to repent on this day for whatever sins he had on him, seeking some solace or redemption away from the fate of Carmine's sword but there was no sense of mercy left in the heart of the nodachi wielding man. A breath rung free...
His remembering was over and the droplets of rain now began to mix with the red that dripped from off the blade of his weapon, Carmine was done reminiscing how it had all come to this. One Captain and one soon to be Shichibukai, the former being the one crying and begging to live even despite having attacked the latter with no abandon for the lives of his crew. "Please I beggin' 'ere, spare me!" Berso pleaded, but those words fell on deaf eyes - Carmine simply lifted his blade and pressed it onto Berso's chest, speaking clear as the day had been before all of this.
"Your death will be the slowest - for you condemned the lives of your own crew when you told them to attack me, I gave you a way out.. the doors are shut for you now, so give my regards to the Demons in Hell.. tell them they'll be next." Red eyes, just like the fabled beasts of lore... but now they were from Carmine and they watched the terrible fate of Berso as the nodachi's blade pierced the flesh and slowly, painfully, traveled it's way to the other man's heart, finally puncturing it and causing the man to bleed to death alongside the cut organs in it's way.
The weapon was pulled free and Berso's body slumped onto the ground, leaving another stain to the once peaceful shoreline, a pity such a beautiful day was now ruined with rain and death. It was even more regrettable that Carmine was not alone in this act as the Marine Officials had arrived to lend support in dealing with Berso as they had thought the Captain had come to terrorize the land but instead bore witness to Carmine slaughtering him for his ruthless unprovoked attack without mercy.
"Welcome to the Island, New Shichibukai - Vermilion Heir!" One of the officials called out, saluting him, no doubt afraid of what he just saw. Good, it was nice to see that even the Marines knew of fear... better to be called a coward then to die a fool like Berso. This was just the beginning though.. there was more to do as Shichibukai in this world and this action - this tale that the Marines would tell across the globe, would be Carmine's first step towards his future -- The Beginning of the End.
CREATED BY PUNK OF BSRP
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| | | | TrillionTrillaTunka
Position : Paradise Pirate
Berries : 5,000,000
Posts : 28
Skill Sheet
Skill 1: Suna Suna No Mi
Skill 2: Historian
Skill 3: could read or write any thing
| | Subject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration Sun Aug 28, 2016 2:21 pm | |
| Crew: Former king of Sandra kingdom ( N/A) Position: supernova Tier: 1 Activity: school don't start back for four weeks so alot Why: Because I'm the real deal. Y'all would never have a supernova like me NPC in here are made for the sample vice admiral rear admirals and Mafia boss and yes the Royal family of Sandra Also most of the PC supernovas haven't been on in months Blake since last year. Skai - Spoiler:
Marvel - Spoiler:
Icey - Spoiler:
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Sample:Present time age thirty-five. Phase One
Over thirty royal guards walked around Trillion. He was in chains not sea stone chains just regular steel made chains. Walking in front of them was the now queen of Sandra Skai. Skai was Trillion younger half sister from their mother. As they walk down the hallway towards the outside a crowd could be heard cheering. Why was they cheering and why was queen Skai crying. Because today was the day her brother was to be put to death. He was being executed for killing the former king and price of Sandra. As they opened the giant gated doors the crowd became ever so loud. Trillion smiled as the sun beamed down over them. Trillion looked over at the crowd as they threw things and yelled names. Trillion was soon placed on his knees as queen Skai looked down sadly at him. Tunka today you is to be put to death for crimes not only in this kingdom but world wide as well. You betrayed this kingdom and even the world government. Who was even so nicely to give you the title of warlord. What do you say in your defense. Trillion started laughing just kept on shaking his head and heavy laughing. Skai looked at him with a sad grin, why do you laugh a happy laughter. Trillion looked than said, because if I knew what I know now back then I would have did way more. I would have broken the bar code hell I would have even sold you to slavery. Just might do it again if given the chance. Thank the heavens that bitch mother of ours is missing and that your brother and father is dead. I've got my wish oh yeah such a perfect wish. Because if you knew what I do you would have done the same thing. But to keep your family so-called honor in place I choose not to say a word. Skai looked at him but was too sad so sad she started to cry even hugging Trillion.She stood back up as the two soldiers got ready to slice his head off. Trillion started to remember how he got here in the first place.
Part-time age Fourteen
Aaaggh!!! A young Trillion was knocked on the floor by his step father yet again. A little bruise on his lip and a cut under his eye. This man was the king of Sandra Donkey Galloway. Damn you boy your nothing more than a walking displace an embarrassment to my marriage. That father of yours raped my wife your mother and hear you are how sickening. He walked away as Trillion was getting up off the floor as his half brother saw it all. His brother name was Icey and he was a major prick to Trillion. Wow my father really does hate you how sad. Yet so funny if I do say so myself. Trillion said nothing as he got up and walked it off.
One year later
This girl who was so perfect who had everyone attention was so beautiful so graceful she was Marvel. Most would think she was a earth angel.Sadly she was in love with both Trillion and Icey but could only be with only one of them. Skai was there as well however she showed a funny way of love to her brother Trillion she hates him she hates him not. However everywhere Trillion went somebody told him his life was a curse as Icey was a blessing. But Marvel and Skai gave him hope to live on. Marvel was a princess from another kingdom. It was to merge with Sandra to be strong enough to fight off the invading empire of Kappa.
The crowning ceremony came as Icey was being crowned the next King and their mother Magnificent was also there. Seeing such praise made Trillion sad as everyone acknowledge Icey existence yet no one showed that kind of love for him. Trillion had a one on one conversation with his mother that night. Trillion looked up at the stars than to his mother and said, Mother did you decide to give birth to me because you wanted too or it was against your views on life. Such a question took her by surprise as she said, does it matter your here now right. Besides you wasn't a product of rape but an affair. Most don't know this nor never will but in time some will. Such things stayed in the back of Trillion mind as he always wondered who the man was that father him. Thinking he would never leave his kids ever.
Three weeks later the Kappa troops was warring right into there kingdom castles. Marvel,Sksi,Icey and Trillion made it to the safe guard room. But the troops was trying to get in. There was two other doors leading out. One was to escape while the other was to trick whomever was after them. Trillion choosed to go right as Icey choosed to go left this sparked a much awaited fight. Why must you act like a child at such a time you fool. Trillion laughed than said, ha speak for your self we go right we just might live if we go left they will hunt us down. They went on and on until Skai stepped in. Listen he's right Trillion left is our best way out of hear right leads to a storage room where they will just take the treasure and not our lives. Marvel agreed this angered Trillion. Especially when Icey said he was the king and what he says goes. Trillion looked at Skai and said all sad like, why do you always pick his side for huh. Skai gently touched his face as she said, Because he's my brother that's why. this answer truly broke Trillion heart as he said, yeah well so am I. Clearly she favoured Icey more as the guards started to break down the door. They ran left as Trillion was in the back running he slowed down. He turned around unnoticed as he went the right way. Soon the guards broke down the door as they went after Icey side. Trillion made it to the treasure room and my was there treasure. He looked around than saw a box he shooked it as something was rolling around. He heard somebody coming has he hide. Soon as the chaos had died down the king was reported killed and the queen missing. This was saddened news for most as Icey took his place upon the throne. Skai told Trillion they needed to stick together more than ever. But Trillion wasn't feeling it as he soon left as well he left doing Skai birthday bash.
Age eighteen
It's been three years since he left home he still had that box from that time as well. Trillion was now a underboss to a Mafia family the Cologne. He did missions after missions gaining the reputation the restless hitman. But still he was unhappy there as well Trillion soon heard that the queen of Sandra was in town thinking it was Skai he went to see her. He made it threw all the guards only to find that it was in fact Marvel who was now married to the crippled Icey. She explained to him how they was in a losing war in she had to get away. The Kappa nation had taken Skai as well. But he didn't care to much it wasn't his problem. Marvel said the reason she came was because her located said that the power of the desert was in the town. This fact greatly shocked Trillion she told him the power was to give someone control over the desert. The location device sent them right to Trillion house right to the box. It was too quiet after that that you could hear a fly wing beat. Sandra has the box lock as Marvel kingdom had the key only together could it be open. Soon the box was open and there it was Trillion didn't even notice it but he had the sand sand fruit with him all this time. As they both reached for the devil fruit they hands touched relighting sparks. They made love that night over and over again . But when Marvel woke up the next day Trillion had skipped town with the fruit. She was heartbroken but Trillion gain the power to become a sand man
Age Twenty-three
Five years later Trillion had become a very powerful and deadly pirate. Trillion reputation was so vast that he was given the title warlord after he killed five rear admirals and one vice admiral. Many feared him as those back at Sandra would fear he'll return to crush them. Trillion clashed with other vice admirals and warlords as well. Losing once only to a admiral.
Age twenty-five
Two years later Trillion went to the Kappa kingdom whom was now part of the world government. However he didn't care as he kill the three princes sold the princess to slavery well traded her for two mermaids. He was soon crowned the new king of Kappa. Most if not all thought this would mean the end of the long bloodthirsty war but no he made it worse. He forced people to join the army in into slavery. Those who made fun of him was killed by quick sand. He soon easily took control of Sandra by beating Icey the king to death. Nobody could stop him he was seemingly unstoppable with that devil fruit. But after he did what he did he saw Marvel she had a daughter about seven her name was Dawn. Do you see none of this would have happened if they listen to me I've lived a very sad life. But happiness is finally coming to me.
Age twenty-eight
Three years later doing this time much has happened Trillion stopped the war in merged the warring kingdoms together to form New Sandra. Marvel still haven't forgive Trillion but he didn't care. One day Dawn waste water on Trillion causing him to become hard this event would change things for the better. As a cry for help a much honer vice admiral was in town. They staged a coop as nearly every one turned on the dictator of New Sandra. Using rain dust to cause it to rain greatly weaken Trillion as he was at his defeat Marvel pointed her sea stone sword at Trillion clearly was able to kill him. Dawn arrived just to see it happen. Go on kill me I'm tire of this life anyhow. She looked as she placed the cuffs on him than said, no because then Dawn will be fatherless because of her mother and I don't want that so I won't kill you. This news greatly shocked Trillion as he realized Dawn was a product of an affair he had with Marvel. He soon remember what his mother said seeing what his mother did is no different than what him and Marvel did. Soon word got out that the warlord was dictating Sandra caused mass slave trades and killed many. He was striped of his warlord title and was to be sent to Impel Down level six. However Sandra new council decided to put him on death row.
Two years later thirty
Trillion been in chains for quite some time waiting on his death date Marvel left the country to hide her shame as Dawn was now twelve and such a beautiful young lady. She would come to his cell nearly everyday to ask him questions. She was the only one he would talk to. He told her he became a pirate to follow after the Heaven Winter pirates to get with all the females and beat up all the males. But they had went missing after the death of the pirate King such news broke his heart. So with that his dreams died he smiled as he told her to follow her dreams no matter what.he didn't speak for the next five years. Trillion just wanted to surpass the pirate King in short.
Present time age thirty-five
Just as he was about to be executed he over heard the three rear admirals talking. It's bad enough the pirate King has returned at least withh the Golden Dragon gone that's one less problem. Trillion looked up as he heard that. You mean to tell me the pirate King is alive oh my god my dreams I could surpass them now. So if my dreams not dead why should I be.
Just than his head was chopped off as sand splashed down. People rejoiced until his body stood up shocking most people yelling get the water. His head soon became one again with his body as he turned into sand knocking over the guards. Grabbing the rear admiral by the neck he said, just where are the Heaven Winter pirates at this moment. The rear admiral told Trillion about what had happened at the tea party this put a big smile on his face. As he caused a freak sand storm he began to walk away again. Skai yelled at him with all that power why be a bad guy. Trillion smiled as he began to blow away with the wind in said, the hell I look like saving a whore I rather be a villain. I've spent seven years chained up waiting on death an for the life of me. I just couldn't find a reason to escape or live for. but now this news has come I got new plans understand me.
He soon escaped Sandra by using the sand news broke out that ex warlord the Golden Dragon Tunka was at large he was last seen in Sandra in might be in the new world hiding. He is dangerous and at this moment count as a supernova because of his threat level beware.
It's been seven years the world forgotten about me. I guess I'll have to make them remember how terrifying the Golden Dragon of Sandra is besides the forecast said it was going to be the biggest sandstorm yet.
Phase Two
It been three full weeks since the Sand-Man Tunka escaped and been hiding in the new world. News of this went across the world pretty fast. New world bounty hunters and marine alike tried to capture him but Everytime it was stopped. They was killed by being crushed to death by sand or dehydration and that brings us to the Lucky bar on a lawless island. The bar was known to house big shot criminals and what not as it was a motel as well. Only the strong can survive there. However the scenery was very bloody as bounty hunters and marine soldiers was laid out all over the bar. Blood soaked sand yuck only three people was still alive or conscious. The Sand-Man Tunka a mystery woman and a young waiter. As Tunka lit his cigar he blow smoke as the woman looked on. She was known for her many raids on other families and pirates. She was the new underboss of the cologne family. Her name was Jupiter the star mistress. But back then she wasn't very known being that Tunka was the underboss at the time.
She looked at him and said, my oh my it been years has it not since we've set down like this. Every since you left the family we been watching you. Your actions everything you became a warlord hell even a king with that power of yours. We could be no we could run the mafia with such might what do you say. Tunka looked at her for a clean ten minutes than answered. I'm done with the mafia ain't nothing there y'all could offer me got it. She smiled at him a lovely grinning smile, my oh my you've been at large for three weeks now at least am I right. You see we could work together you have something I need and I have something you want. He got up and started to walk off, there's nothing you got that I could ever want Jupiter. She licked her lips than said, oh supernova Tunka I have information on where a map is to a ancient weapon recipe. It's power was said to blow things up.
He stopped than turned back around as he sat back down, keep talking now you got my attention. She laughed at his quick response, that's so like you to change your mind when you get something you want. Anyways the ancient recipe is well how can I put it a purple like substance. It's said if made right it could do some real damage. He looked on at her so tell me where can I find it and how can I get it. She open a map and showed him a lay out of a casino.
Here it's here at a ex vice president of the mafia company casino. The thing is I need power to get in there power like yours. You see it's a place surrounded by sand you could easily storm the place. But ex president Homer is no fool he is protected by the government so he has three rear admirals guarding the place. So your in or what.
Tunka looked at her with a joker smiled letting her know he good for it. Looking over at the waiter they ask for the bill the waiter said it was on the house as Jupiter said very well and wise.
One month passed as the operation to rob the casino took place. Tunka nearly wiped out all the guards as only one rear admiral was remaining. He fired shot after shot at Tunka as it only burst upon impact on his sand body. Homer looked on terrified. Damn the rumors are true this supernova is crazy he attacked this place single handedly what the hell man I don't want to die.
Tunka smiled as he knocked him threw a wall grabbing hold of Homer. Alright old man open up the vault and I'll let you live. I won't ask a second time. Ex president Homer soon open the vault revealing the recipe book of the ancient weapon and the Ocean Pearl. So Homer was in Tunka hand as he blasted him out the window causing him to fall to his death. As Tunka was walking out he saw Jupiter and her men. Well Sand-Man this is where you died this little act you did today will surely make you a mafia target. But if I kill you I'll be a family boss and be rewarded by the government. Now gentleman kill him make it quick quite and painless . The soldiers looked at her than started smiling as she was wondering why they wasn't doing anything. You see your too cheap Jupiter you always have been. I decided to pay these soldiers your soldiers this very pearl. It will fetch them at least thirty mill. Now my new pirate crew kill her but make it slow painful and loud.
As Tunka was walking she said, your nothing more than a snake in the water you a fucking crocodile. He smiled as he went on about his business.
Phase Three
Back at marine headquarters a young woman was reading the news seeing Tunka face in it yet again. This woman was the one who stopped him once. She was vice admiral Jovonna Style her reputation was vast as she ranked up fast being twenty-eight and hold a vice admiral title. She balled the paper up as she started to walk to her ship angry. Damn that Sand-Man Tunka I should have killed him back then damn it all. If he not pissing off the world government he pissing off the under world. A guy like him shouldn't be around for much longer. I swear he killed some of my closes friends. I'll have his head.
She made it to her ship as she got there it was two more rear admirals waiting on her and a new captain who was making a name for herself. Jovonna didn't have to ask what they wanted she knew it already. They was hear to get Sand-Man Tunka a supernova whom been on a rampage as of late..
Tunka smiled as he held up the dyna stone after raiding yet another marine armoury house. But for what reason did he want them for was unknown.
Ten days later the clouds was starting to get dark getting ready to storm. Finally vice admiral Jovonna located the Sand pirates and their captain. It was a battle from the beginning as both leaders looked at each other. The young marine captain held her head down bitting her lip.
I'm bringing this to a end your going to die today. You did too much how could you run out of order like this. He laughed as he blow smoke, well yeah I ranned out of order but I'm still full of chaos. I was titled a warlord of the sea a king of a kingdom and now a supernova how painful. People forgotten about me yet again. This time I'm about to do something that would make them never forget me and always remember what I did. When I'm done here the world will know I was hear.
She than said your listed as a supernova trust me the world already knows your hear as cannon fire was heard the battle of the Trillion's had begun.
Screaming ,gun shots and loud booms could be heard as swords was clashing. Bodies falling off the ships as each one was on fire. The water below was turning red and black from the oil and blood. The young marine captain was dashing and clashing any pirate she saw. Her pink hair blowing in the wind this young girl was none other than Trillion Trilla Skai. Who joined the marines to stop her father. As she slashed down she could she her father trading blows with the vice admiral however his sand powers was giving him the upper hand. She started to run towards them.. Trillion looked down at the wounded Jovonna as she was shot and had broken bones. Well well well this time you won't beat me. I've got other things to do and dying ain't one of them. He raised his hand up as he was getting ready to proud her head in. Just than sea water was thrown on him as she sliced him with her sword. Jovonna quickly punched him back. As she fell back down Tunka slowly got up smiling. Damn you've grown you look just like her baby girl. holding on to her sword tightly she took a deep breath, father no Sand-Man Tunka your under arrest. Try as you might but your going down. He laughed just as he was about to say something he saw five war ships coming. He looked at her, I'll love to stay in catch up but I got bigger things to do. I'm sorry things turned out this way Skai I really am well bye baby girl bye. Sand hurricane he cooked up a sand storm as he took the dyna stones and fled on a smaller size boat. Skai looked over as she wave down the war ships.
Finally that stupid bitch Jovonna such a problem woman. This is but a minor setback yeah I just lost my crew but they was nothing special. I still got the dyna stones. This will please them dearly but I have a new goal now and that goal is to become the new pirate king and that's facts.
As he started to close his eye he remembered seeing the pirate king head getting cut off this moment would later inspire him to take the now empty title.
Supernovas Trillion Trilla Tunka drifted off laying low for now.
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| I regret to inform you that there is no Super Nova Positions at this time. you will have to wait until a Position is Available to apply. Try again at a later date. - TrillionTrillaTunka wrote:
Crew: Former king of Sandra kingdom ( N/A)
Position: supernova
Tier: 1
Activity: school don't start back for four weeks so alot
Why: Because I'm the real deal. Y'all would never have a supernova like me
NPC in here are made for the sample vice admiral rear admirals and Mafia boss and yes the Royal family of Sandra Also most of the PC supernovas haven't been on in months Blake since last year.
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Sample:Present time age thirty-five. Phase One
Over thirty royal guards walked around Trillion. He was in chains not sea stone chains just regular steel made chains. Walking in front of them was the now queen of Sandra Skai. Skai was Trillion younger half sister from their mother. As they walk down the hallway towards the outside a crowd could be heard cheering. Why was they cheering and why was queen Skai crying. Because today was the day her brother was to be put to death. He was being executed for killing the former king and price of Sandra. As they opened the giant gated doors the crowd became ever so loud. Trillion smiled as the sun beamed down over them. Trillion looked over at the crowd as they threw things and yelled names. Trillion was soon placed on his knees as queen Skai looked down sadly at him. Tunka today you is to be put to death for crimes not only in this kingdom but world wide as well. You betrayed this kingdom and even the world government. Who was even so nicely to give you the title of warlord. What do you say in your defense. Trillion started laughing just kept on shaking his head and heavy laughing. Skai looked at him with a sad grin, why do you laugh a happy laughter. Trillion looked than said, because if I knew what I know now back then I would have did way more. I would have broken the bar code hell I would have even sold you to slavery. Just might do it again if given the chance. Thank the heavens that bitch mother of ours is missing and that your brother and father is dead. I've got my wish oh yeah such a perfect wish. Because if you knew what I do you would have done the same thing. But to keep your family so-called honor in place I choose not to say a word. Skai looked at him but was too sad so sad she started to cry even hugging Trillion.She stood back up as the two soldiers got ready to slice his head off. Trillion started to remember how he got here in the first place.
Part-time age Fourteen
Aaaggh!!! A young Trillion was knocked on the floor by his step father yet again. A little bruise on his lip and a cut under his eye. This man was the king of Sandra Donkey Galloway. Damn you boy your nothing more than a walking displace an embarrassment to my marriage. That father of yours raped my wife your mother and hear you are how sickening. He walked away as Trillion was getting up off the floor as his half brother saw it all. His brother name was Icey and he was a major prick to Trillion. Wow my father really does hate you how sad. Yet so funny if I do say so myself. Trillion said nothing as he got up and walked it off.
One year later
This girl who was so perfect who had everyone attention was so beautiful so graceful she was Marvel. Most would think she was a earth angel.Sadly she was in love with both Trillion and Icey but could only be with only one of them. Skai was there as well however she showed a funny way of love to her brother Trillion she hates him she hates him not. However everywhere Trillion went somebody told him his life was a curse as Icey was a blessing. But Marvel and Skai gave him hope to live on. Marvel was a princess from another kingdom. It was to merge with Sandra to be strong enough to fight off the invading empire of Kappa.
The crowning ceremony came as Icey was being crowned the next King and their mother Magnificent was also there. Seeing such praise made Trillion sad as everyone acknowledge Icey existence yet no one showed that kind of love for him. Trillion had a one on one conversation with his mother that night. Trillion looked up at the stars than to his mother and said, Mother did you decide to give birth to me because you wanted too or it was against your views on life. Such a question took her by surprise as she said, does it matter your here now right. Besides you wasn't a product of rape but an affair. Most don't know this nor never will but in time some will. Such things stayed in the back of Trillion mind as he always wondered who the man was that father him. Thinking he would never leave his kids ever.
Three weeks later the Kappa troops was warring right into there kingdom castles. Marvel,Sksi,Icey and Trillion made it to the safe guard room. But the troops was trying to get in. There was two other doors leading out. One was to escape while the other was to trick whomever was after them. Trillion choosed to go right as Icey choosed to go left this sparked a much awaited fight. Why must you act like a child at such a time you fool. Trillion laughed than said, ha speak for your self we go right we just might live if we go left they will hunt us down. They went on and on until Skai stepped in. Listen he's right Trillion left is our best way out of hear right leads to a storage room where they will just take the treasure and not our lives. Marvel agreed this angered Trillion. Especially when Icey said he was the king and what he says goes. Trillion looked at Skai and said all sad like, why do you always pick his side for huh. Skai gently touched his face as she said, Because he's my brother that's why. this answer truly broke Trillion heart as he said, yeah well so am I. Clearly she favoured Icey more as the guards started to break down the door. They ran left as Trillion was in the back running he slowed down. He turned around unnoticed as he went the right way. Soon the guards broke down the door as they went after Icey side. Trillion made it to the treasure room and my was there treasure. He looked around than saw a box he shooked it as something was rolling around. He heard somebody coming has he hide. Soon as the chaos had died down the king was reported killed and the queen missing. This was saddened news for most as Icey took his place upon the throne. Skai told Trillion they needed to stick together more than ever. But Trillion wasn't feeling it as he soon left as well he left doing Skai birthday bash.
Age eighteen
It's been three years since he left home he still had that box from that time as well. Trillion was now a underboss to a Mafia family the Cologne. He did missions after missions gaining the reputation the restless hitman. But still he was unhappy there as well Trillion soon heard that the queen of Sandra was in town thinking it was Skai he went to see her. He made it threw all the guards only to find that it was in fact Marvel who was now married to the crippled Icey. She explained to him how they was in a losing war in she had to get away. The Kappa nation had taken Skai as well. But he didn't care to much it wasn't his problem. Marvel said the reason she came was because her located said that the power of the desert was in the town. This fact greatly shocked Trillion she told him the power was to give someone control over the desert. The location device sent them right to Trillion house right to the box. It was too quiet after that that you could hear a fly wing beat. Sandra has the box lock as Marvel kingdom had the key only together could it be open. Soon the box was open and there it was Trillion didn't even notice it but he had the sand sand fruit with him all this time. As they both reached for the devil fruit they hands touched relighting sparks. They made love that night over and over again . But when Marvel woke up the next day Trillion had skipped town with the fruit. She was heartbroken but Trillion gain the power to become a sand man
Age Twenty-three
Five years later Trillion had become a very powerful and deadly pirate. Trillion reputation was so vast that he was given the title warlord after he killed five rear admirals and one vice admiral. Many feared him as those back at Sandra would fear he'll return to crush them. Trillion clashed with other vice admirals and warlords as well. Losing once only to a admiral.
Age twenty-five
Two years later Trillion went to the Kappa kingdom whom was now part of the world government. However he didn't care as he kill the three princes sold the princess to slavery well traded her for two mermaids. He was soon crowned the new king of Kappa. Most if not all thought this would mean the end of the long bloodthirsty war but no he made it worse. He forced people to join the army in into slavery. Those who made fun of him was killed by quick sand. He soon easily took control of Sandra by beating Icey the king to death. Nobody could stop him he was seemingly unstoppable with that devil fruit. But after he did what he did he saw Marvel she had a daughter about seven her name was Dawn. Do you see none of this would have happened if they listen to me I've lived a very sad life. But happiness is finally coming to me.
Age twenty-eight
Three years later doing this time much has happened Trillion stopped the war in merged the warring kingdoms together to form New Sandra. Marvel still haven't forgive Trillion but he didn't care. One day Dawn waste water on Trillion causing him to become hard this event would change things for the better. As a cry for help a much honer vice admiral was in town. They staged a coop as nearly every one turned on the dictator of New Sandra. Using rain dust to cause it to rain greatly weaken Trillion as he was at his defeat Marvel pointed her sea stone sword at Trillion clearly was able to kill him. Dawn arrived just to see it happen. Go on kill me I'm tire of this life anyhow. She looked as she placed the cuffs on him than said, no because then Dawn will be fatherless because of her mother and I don't want that so I won't kill you. This news greatly shocked Trillion as he realized Dawn was a product of an affair he had with Marvel. He soon remember what his mother said seeing what his mother did is no different than what him and Marvel did. Soon word got out that the warlord was dictating Sandra caused mass slave trades and killed many. He was striped of his warlord title and was to be sent to Impel Down level six. However Sandra new council decided to put him on death row.
Two years later thirty
Trillion been in chains for quite some time waiting on his death date Marvel left the country to hide her shame as Dawn was now twelve and such a beautiful young lady. She would come to his cell nearly everyday to ask him questions. She was the only one he would talk to. He told her he became a pirate to follow after the Heaven Winter pirates to get with all the females and beat up all the males. But they had went missing after the death of the pirate King such news broke his heart. So with that his dreams died he smiled as he told her to follow her dreams no matter what.he didn't speak for the next five years. Trillion just wanted to surpass the pirate King in short.
Present time age thirty-five
Just as he was about to be executed he over heard the three rear admirals talking. It's bad enough the pirate King has returned at least withh the Golden Dragon gone that's one less problem. Trillion looked up as he heard that. You mean to tell me the pirate King is alive oh my god my dreams I could surpass them now. So if my dreams not dead why should I be.
Just than his head was chopped off as sand splashed down. People rejoiced until his body stood up shocking most people yelling get the water. His head soon became one again with his body as he turned into sand knocking over the guards. Grabbing the rear admiral by the neck he said, just where are the Heaven Winter pirates at this moment. The rear admiral told Trillion about what had happened at the tea party this put a big smile on his face. As he caused a freak sand storm he began to walk away again. Skai yelled at him with all that power why be a bad guy. Trillion smiled as he began to blow away with the wind in said, the hell I look like saving a whore I rather be a villain. I've spent seven years chained up waiting on death an for the life of me. I just couldn't find a reason to escape or live for. but now this news has come I got new plans understand me.
He soon escaped Sandra by using the sand news broke out that ex warlord the Golden Dragon Tunka was at large he was last seen in Sandra in might be in the new world hiding. He is dangerous and at this moment count as a supernova because of his threat level beware.
It's been seven years the world forgotten about me. I guess I'll have to make them remember how terrifying the Golden Dragon of Sandra is besides the forecast said it was going to be the biggest sandstorm yet.
Phase Two
It been three full weeks since the Sand-Man Tunka escaped and been hiding in the new world. News of this went across the world pretty fast. New world bounty hunters and marine alike tried to capture him but Everytime it was stopped. They was killed by being crushed to death by sand or dehydration and that brings us to the Lucky bar on a lawless island. The bar was known to house big shot criminals and what not as it was a motel as well. Only the strong can survive there. However the scenery was very bloody as bounty hunters and marine soldiers was laid out all over the bar. Blood soaked sand yuck only three people was still alive or conscious. The Sand-Man Tunka a mystery woman and a young waiter. As Tunka lit his cigar he blow smoke as the woman looked on. She was known for her many raids on other families and pirates. She was the new underboss of the cologne family. Her name was Jupiter the star mistress. But back then she wasn't very known being that Tunka was the underboss at the time.
She looked at him and said, my oh my it been years has it not since we've set down like this. Every since you left the family we been watching you. Your actions everything you became a warlord hell even a king with that power of yours. We could be no we could run the mafia with such might what do you say. Tunka looked at her for a clean ten minutes than answered. I'm done with the mafia ain't nothing there y'all could offer me got it. She smiled at him a lovely grinning smile, my oh my you've been at large for three weeks now at least am I right. You see we could work together you have something I need and I have something you want. He got up and started to walk off, there's nothing you got that I could ever want Jupiter. She licked her lips than said, oh supernova Tunka I have information on where a map is to a ancient weapon recipe. It's power was said to blow things up.
He stopped than turned back around as he sat back down, keep talking now you got my attention. She laughed at his quick response, that's so like you to change your mind when you get something you want. Anyways the ancient recipe is well how can I put it a purple like substance. It's said if made right it could do some real damage. He looked on at her so tell me where can I find it and how can I get it. She open a map and showed him a lay out of a casino.
Here it's here at a ex vice president of the mafia company casino. The thing is I need power to get in there power like yours. You see it's a place surrounded by sand you could easily storm the place. But ex president Homer is no fool he is protected by the government so he has three rear admirals guarding the place. So your in or what.
Tunka looked at her with a joker smiled letting her know he good for it. Looking over at the waiter they ask for the bill the waiter said it was on the house as Jupiter said very well and wise.
One month passed as the operation to rob the casino took place. Tunka nearly wiped out all the guards as only one rear admiral was remaining. He fired shot after shot at Tunka as it only burst upon impact on his sand body. Homer looked on terrified. Damn the rumors are true this supernova is crazy he attacked this place single handedly what the hell man I don't want to die.
Tunka smiled as he knocked him threw a wall grabbing hold of Homer. Alright old man open up the vault and I'll let you live. I won't ask a second time. Ex president Homer soon open the vault revealing the recipe book of the ancient weapon and the Ocean Pearl. So Homer was in Tunka hand as he blasted him out the window causing him to fall to his death. As Tunka was walking out he saw Jupiter and her men. Well Sand-Man this is where you died this little act you did today will surely make you a mafia target. But if I kill you I'll be a family boss and be rewarded by the government. Now gentleman kill him make it quick quite and painless . The soldiers looked at her than started smiling as she was wondering why they wasn't doing anything. You see your too cheap Jupiter you always have been. I decided to pay these soldiers your soldiers this very pearl. It will fetch them at least thirty mill. Now my new pirate crew kill her but make it slow painful and loud.
As Tunka was walking she said, your nothing more than a snake in the water you a fucking crocodile. He smiled as he went on about his business.
Phase Three
Back at marine headquarters a young woman was reading the news seeing Tunka face in it yet again. This woman was the one who stopped him once. She was vice admiral Jovonna Style her reputation was vast as she ranked up fast being twenty-eight and hold a vice admiral title. She balled the paper up as she started to walk to her ship angry. Damn that Sand-Man Tunka I should have killed him back then damn it all. If he not pissing off the world government he pissing off the under world. A guy like him shouldn't be around for much longer. I swear he killed some of my closes friends. I'll have his head.
She made it to her ship as she got there it was two more rear admirals waiting on her and a new captain who was making a name for herself. Jovonna didn't have to ask what they wanted she knew it already. They was hear to get Sand-Man Tunka a supernova whom been on a rampage as of late..
Tunka smiled as he held up the dyna stone after raiding yet another marine armoury house. But for what reason did he want them for was unknown.
Ten days later the clouds was starting to get dark getting ready to storm. Finally vice admiral Jovonna located the Sand pirates and their captain. It was a battle from the beginning as both leaders looked at each other. The young marine captain held her head down bitting her lip.
I'm bringing this to a end your going to die today. You did too much how could you run out of order like this. He laughed as he blow smoke, well yeah I ranned out of order but I'm still full of chaos. I was titled a warlord of the sea a king of a kingdom and now a supernova how painful. People forgotten about me yet again. This time I'm about to do something that would make them never forget me and always remember what I did. When I'm done here the world will know I was hear.
She than said your listed as a supernova trust me the world already knows your hear as cannon fire was heard the battle of the Trillion's had begun.
Screaming ,gun shots and loud booms could be heard as swords was clashing. Bodies falling off the ships as each one was on fire. The water below was turning red and black from the oil and blood. The young marine captain was dashing and clashing any pirate she saw. Her pink hair blowing in the wind this young girl was none other than Trillion Trilla Skai. Who joined the marines to stop her father. As she slashed down she could she her father trading blows with the vice admiral however his sand powers was giving him the upper hand. She started to run towards them.. Trillion looked down at the wounded Jovonna as she was shot and had broken bones. Well well well this time you won't beat me. I've got other things to do and dying ain't one of them. He raised his hand up as he was getting ready to proud her head in. Just than sea water was thrown on him as she sliced him with her sword. Jovonna quickly punched him back. As she fell back down Tunka slowly got up smiling. Damn you've grown you look just like her baby girl. holding on to her sword tightly she took a deep breath, father no Sand-Man Tunka your under arrest. Try as you might but your going down. He laughed just as he was about to say something he saw five war ships coming. He looked at her, I'll love to stay in catch up but I got bigger things to do. I'm sorry things turned out this way Skai I really am well bye baby girl bye. Sand hurricane he cooked up a sand storm as he took the dyna stones and fled on a smaller size boat. Skai looked over as she wave down the war ships.
Finally that stupid bitch Jovonna such a problem woman. This is but a minor setback yeah I just lost my crew but they was nothing special. I still got the dyna stones. This will please them dearly but I have a new goal now and that goal is to become the new pirate king and that's facts.
As he started to close his eye he remembered seeing the pirate king head getting cut off this moment would later inspire him to take the now empty title.
Supernovas Trillion Trilla Tunka drifted off laying low for now.
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| | Subject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration Fri Sep 23, 2016 9:48 pm | |
| Crew: N/A Position: Supernova Tier: F Activity: Very - This is an alt for my main account which is also fairly active (Lillie Elric) Why: IC Reasons: To spread the word of his God with his reputation as well as be strong enough to defend it if need be. OOC Reasons: Because many characters / NPCs are exclusively higher tiers / levels making it very hard to start properly from level 0 and Pirates have many positions opening up due to inactivity. Sample: - Sample:
Takuji adjusted the swords upon his back subconsciously as he approached a rather large and imposing Marine Base that, from what he had been told by civilians around town, housed a certain Vice Admiral that knew the location or at least the direction of a man who the Paladin was in search of. The reason that Takuji was tracking this man was because of what he had heard from the locals who claimed that he was able to craft Souls and bend them to his will - something that the young man believed most certainly would qualify as an ability only someone classifiable as a Deity would be capable of and as such, may even be the 'Reincarnation of God' that his parents had told him about since his youth and even tasked him with leaving home to find.
The young Paladin hoped that all of this would not turn out to be merely rumors or some sort of trap, after-all, if this man were indeed real and this Marine knew where he was: Takuji would be one step closer to bringing a new age to his parent's island and subsequently all of the Seas as a whole with the second coming of his God. So he pushed forward, entering the perimeter of the base while drawing his swords with a slow screeching of metal against metal as he held them at his sides while moving up to a large gate which blocked entry into the base and the massive castle that had been converted into the main building wherein the Vice Admiral had set up his personal quarters and kept a few Rear Admirals and other Marines as personal bodyguards to protect him from intruders, like Takuji.
With a deep breath, the young Paladin prepared himself before giving the gate a few deep slashes with his two swords and then kicking it open loudly as Marines began to pour out from the building due to the commotion and would charge the young man who used his blades effectively to duel them alongside his speed, parrying and striking whenever he could grab an opportunity through the relatively low powered soldiers as he fought his way into the main building itself, trying to be careful to not kill those to whom he could avoid doing so. Once inside would ascend a staircase that led to the upper floor of the building that the Vice Admiral and his bodyguards resided on for their own safety.
The bodyguards in question, several much stronger looking Marines varying in rank and appearance, would rush out from the Vice Admiral's quarters and to meet Takuji himself who would raise his blades slowly in preparation for defending himself as he spoke towards them:
"I'm just here to get some answers - You don't have to throw your lives away.." Takuji said wearily, attempting to reason with the bodyguards as one of them merely spat and said with a growl. "We aren't going to listen to no filthy Pirate, especially one go goes around hackin' up our men!" The Marine said before then rushing Takuji with a sword and powerfully slashing downward just as Takuji would turn his serrated blade and use the small gaps of the serrated edge to catch the blade and pull sideways, disarming the man and using his other sword to strike him on the back of the head with the hilt, aiming to be non-lethal in this approach.
Soon after this first one had been dispatched, the second and third Marines would rush him at the same time with their own blades, attempting to overwhelm the Paladin who did his best to block or parry attacks that came his way. Unfortunately for Takuji, although he had trained himself quite well over a period of time at home and while on the seas searching for his God, he was not perfect and took a few powerful slashes across his chest as a result that caused blood to begin pouring from his wounds and despite this injury, he would continue fighting and even managed to catch another one of the Marine's blade in his Adjudicator's serrated blade and toss it away, slamming the hilt of his blade in to the mans solar plexus before then parrying the other's attack and slamming both hilts into the man's back, knocking him down before then rendering both Marine's unconscious with powerful blows to their heads.
Panting and seriously wounded, Takuji burst into the Vice Admiral's quarters with a loud crash before then stumbling over to the man who - despite his rank, seemed surprisingly frail and old although with a very serious and somewhat intimidating disposition. The Vice Admiral looked to the young man and seemed shocked that he managed to make it to his quarters and reached for a gun which the Paladin knocked away before sheathing one of his blades and grabbing the man by the collar whilst using the other blade to place to his neck:
"Where is he..? Where is.. The Soul-Smith?" Takuji asked with a growl, blood continuing to pool at his feet as the Vice Admiral's eyes seemed to shake with fear as he spoke in response to the Paladin's request. "H-He is in the South Blue, that is all I know you filthy Pirate!" The man stammered, Takuji simply dropping him with a 'thump' onto the ground before sheathing his other sword and slowly beginning to shamble out of the Marine Base and away from it towards the city where he would hope to find a Doctor and after that, towards the Docks.
He now knew where the man he was searching for was located, or at least which Blue he had traveled to and as such - His quest for the second coming of his God just became that much clearer.
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| | Subject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration Sat Sep 24, 2016 1:33 am | |
| - Takuji wrote:
Crew: N/A
Position: Supernova
Tier: F
Activity: Very - This is an alt for my main account which is also fairly active (Lillie Elric)
Why: IC Reasons: To spread the word of his God with his reputation as well as be strong enough to defend it if need be.
OOC Reasons: Because many characters / NPCs are exclusively higher tiers / levels making it very hard to start properly from level 0 and Pirates have many positions opening up due to inactivity.
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Takuji adjusted the swords upon his back subconsciously as he approached a rather large and imposing Marine Base that, from what he had been told by civilians around town, housed a certain Vice Admiral that knew the location or at least the direction of a man who the Paladin was in search of. The reason that Takuji was tracking this man was because of what he had heard from the locals who claimed that he was able to craft Souls and bend them to his will - something that the young man believed most certainly would qualify as an ability only someone classifiable as a Deity would be capable of and as such, may even be the 'Reincarnation of God' that his parents had told him about since his youth and even tasked him with leaving home to find.
The young Paladin hoped that all of this would not turn out to be merely rumors or some sort of trap, after-all, if this man were indeed real and this Marine knew where he was: Takuji would be one step closer to bringing a new age to his parent's island and subsequently all of the Seas as a whole with the second coming of his God. So he pushed forward, entering the perimeter of the base while drawing his swords with a slow screeching of metal against metal as he held them at his sides while moving up to a large gate which blocked entry into the base and the massive castle that had been converted into the main building wherein the Vice Admiral had set up his personal quarters and kept a few Rear Admirals and other Marines as personal bodyguards to protect him from intruders, like Takuji.
With a deep breath, the young Paladin prepared himself before giving the gate a few deep slashes with his two swords and then kicking it open loudly as Marines began to pour out from the building due to the commotion and would charge the young man who used his blades effectively to duel them alongside his speed, parrying and striking whenever he could grab an opportunity through the relatively low powered soldiers as he fought his way into the main building itself, trying to be careful to not kill those to whom he could avoid doing so. Once inside would ascend a staircase that led to the upper floor of the building that the Vice Admiral and his bodyguards resided on for their own safety.
The bodyguards in question, several much stronger looking Marines varying in rank and appearance, would rush out from the Vice Admiral's quarters and to meet Takuji himself who would raise his blades slowly in preparation for defending himself as he spoke towards them:
"I'm just here to get some answers - You don't have to throw your lives away.." Takuji said wearily, attempting to reason with the bodyguards as one of them merely spat and said with a growl. "We aren't going to listen to no filthy Pirate, especially one go goes around hackin' up our men!" The Marine said before then rushing Takuji with a sword and powerfully slashing downward just as Takuji would turn his serrated blade and use the small gaps of the serrated edge to catch the blade and pull sideways, disarming the man and using his other sword to strike him on the back of the head with the hilt, aiming to be non-lethal in this approach.
Soon after this first one had been dispatched, the second and third Marines would rush him at the same time with their own blades, attempting to overwhelm the Paladin who did his best to block or parry attacks that came his way. Unfortunately for Takuji, although he had trained himself quite well over a period of time at home and while on the seas searching for his God, he was not perfect and took a few powerful slashes across his chest as a result that caused blood to begin pouring from his wounds and despite this injury, he would continue fighting and even managed to catch another one of the Marine's blade in his Adjudicator's serrated blade and toss it away, slamming the hilt of his blade in to the mans solar plexus before then parrying the other's attack and slamming both hilts into the man's back, knocking him down before then rendering both Marine's unconscious with powerful blows to their heads.
Panting and seriously wounded, Takuji burst into the Vice Admiral's quarters with a loud crash before then stumbling over to the man who - despite his rank, seemed surprisingly frail and old although with a very serious and somewhat intimidating disposition. The Vice Admiral looked to the young man and seemed shocked that he managed to make it to his quarters and reached for a gun which the Paladin knocked away before sheathing one of his blades and grabbing the man by the collar whilst using the other blade to place to his neck:
"Where is he..? Where is.. The Soul-Smith?" Takuji asked with a growl, blood continuing to pool at his feet as the Vice Admiral's eyes seemed to shake with fear as he spoke in response to the Paladin's request. "H-He is in the South Blue, that is all I know you filthy Pirate!" The man stammered, Takuji simply dropping him with a 'thump' onto the ground before sheathing his other sword and slowly beginning to shamble out of the Marine Base and away from it towards the city where he would hope to find a Doctor and after that, towards the Docks.
He now knew where the man he was searching for was located, or at least which Blue he had traveled to and as such - His quest for the second coming of his God just became that much clearer.
Approved. I like that your dialogue, sense of setting, characters and realism(as far as the OP world is concerned) could've been visualized. Understand, Supernova positions, much like those of past and present will only be partially approved based on activity of the user. If you're activity slips without indication, i.e. notice in the goodbye/welcome section, I'll use due jurisdiction. World Positions give you weight as some of the main characters in the site plot etc, so whole this with pride.
Anyway, onto the good part!
Level 25 Awarded.
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| | Subject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration Mon Sep 26, 2016 2:38 am | |
| Crew: N/a Atm Position: supernova Tier: F Activity: Very active. Why: Lookin' for a spoopin' good time, figured I could do a lot from this position. Also figured a certain Yonko was hunting Supernovas, wouldn't mind fighting one later down the line. Sample:- Spoiler:
The day started peacefully. He woke early in the morning, his ship being guided by the few merchants he hired to sail him to the next Island. He was in need of a boat and planned to pick one up on the next island. For now, however, he was hiring merchants to carry him around. He managed to hide his not-so well known identity. He wasn't a very popular pirate, at the moment anyways. He didn't commit much crimes, he just polished what skills he could among the merchant ships where he would hitch a ride island to island. He would battle with mercenaries on board to pass the time, using both hand to hand combat and sword duels. He even helped them out by repairing a few blades of theirs, getting extra money on the side. He aided when Pirates would attempt to raid the Merchant's ship, he needed too, otherwise the Pirates would just kill him.
Today, however, was nice and quiet. No ships in sight. Just a calm ocean and a nice cool breeze to go along with the tranquility. The mercenaries were mostly asleep, save for the ones keeping an eye on the surroundings, and Kaijo was sitting back with a fishing pole in hand. Figured he would catch some fish during the calmer moments, help the chef and crew out by fetching more variety to their meals. "Storm in the distance!" a merc yelled from the crows nest. He shouted the direction, as Kaijo gazed eastward he could tell that a hell of a storm was coming. Luckily enough everyone here was trained to deal with storms, everyone began to prepare. Tightening down loose cargo with ropes, the crew would steady themselves by tying down to a nearby position, the person in the crows nest remained. Kaijo had to stop what little activity he could find the time to do, and aide in the preparations as well. It wouldn't take long, since the seas were calm and they saw the storm calming.
Wouldn't be longer than half an hour before the storm was overhead, they could have more than likely stalled it out for later however they began to turn towards it, and against the wind. The rain was light and there were few occurrences of thunder and lightning. The main issue was with the Wind. They were heading against it, which slowed down their pacing. The captain of the ship even argued that they wouldn't be able to meet on schedule due to the storm. Wouldn't be a problem, Kaijo figured. The captain could just use his Den Den mushi to call ahead and let them know when to expect it. Everything would have been fine. That was until he heard a bell ringing, three tones then a five second pause. The first time he heard the tones he panicked a bit. Three tones meant pirates were nearby, he was somewhat hoping he had missed a tone. But nope. Quickily, he surveyed the area around the ship. One was coming from the north. The were two men down in the cabin below, which would open fire on the ship.
It would be futile, however. The ship returned fire, and though seemingly there was no major damage to the ship, the cannons would stop firing. The pirates did, too. They began to forward towards the Merchant ship. A motor seemed to increase the speed of their ship, while the merchant ship ran solely based on sailing. It wouldn't be more than a moment before they were right along the merchant ship. The ship was much larger, and based on the howls of the crew cheering for new treasures, he could tell they were outnumbered as well. He hid, it was the best he could do. He went into a box stored with nothing but barrels, he made room for himself by throwing two overboard and lying in wait. The mercenaries were nothing once they boarded, they were beaten and taken aboard as slaves. The pirates began to take more and more merchandise from the ship, including the box Kaijo was in. The others were tied up. He was, indeed, in a pickle.
The pirates began to party, Kaijo was thrown below deck with the other supplies as he remained hidden in the box. There was a group of pirates down with him, listing off the loot, marking down what they got. Wouldn't be long before the box he was in would be opened. Using a knife he had on hand before the invasion, he would stab the man opening the box, before turning to the other two Pirates down below. He charged them, trying to remain as silent as possible. The two targets seemed speechless, yet at the same time drew their swords. Each ready for combat yet both panicking. The first one would swing their blade, he would duck under that and stab the man in the gut. The second one ran forward and swung downwards towards Kaijo, he backed away leaving his sword impaled into the man. He let out a cry for help, however the echoes of cheering and wailing above the deck made the cry seem mute. Kaijo grinned, taking on the remain soldier as the other one winched in pain. The pirate would swing downwards, Kaijo caught the incoming blade by holding onto the mans wrists. He would proceed to knee him in his stomach. Keeling over, the pirate would begin to stand back up. Kaijo would continuously kick the man until he was knocked unconscious. At this point he would walk over to the crying man. "Weak." He announced to him, before slitting his throat. The party going on above deck seemed to drain the noise made in the cargo hold.
Kaijo made a quick exit from the Cargo hold, leaving through a door that led to a hallway of sorts below the deck. He analyzed the ship trying to find some way off, though he wasn't very positive he could get off while below deck. Emergency ships seemed to be above deck, however he'd have to fight through a raid of pirates before being able to get there. No plan looked too great. However, he would begin to hear the sound of nothing. Absolutely nothing. Everything had stopped making noise, Kaijo would duck into one of the nearby rooms. The party above the deck had stopped, their celebration ceased and there was tones of the bell. Though he couldn't tell what they meant. More pirates, maybe?' He thought to himself. Maybe they were trying to get the drop on an enemy. Though if that were the case, maybe they wouldn't have announced themselves so easily during the storm. There would have had to have been something else that would shut the pirates up.
Before worrying about that, he ensured there was no one in the room. Unfortunately, there was. A single person remaining in the room. Luckily enough, however, they were sleeping. Kaijo would barricade the door, and eye the cannons. He could get a good enough view from around them, glimpsing to the outside world. However, first he needed to off the person maintaining them, sleeping over in a hammock in the corner. He would take out his knife that he had taken back from the pirate's gut, and slit the man's throat. He wanted to be as quiet as possible, what with the rest of the crew up top remaining quiet, no longer canceling out whatever sound he made, making it to where he needed to be more cautious.
With the door barricaded, he was free to take a look outside. He was quite alarmed to see a Navy ship off in the distance, headed this way. He was certain that they'd have noticed the ship, though he was surprised that no one was firing back. That's when it hit him, he was in the room they fire upon their enemies. They would be running down here soon only to notice they couldn't get in. He figured they would eventually break down the door, but after that they'd have to fight Kaijo -- by then the navy should have arrived and would be attacking on the deck.
He would hear a knock on the door. He prepared. The pirate manning the ship's guns, now dead, had left behind a single weapon. A katana blade. He could make use of this. Not only did he train slightly with the Mercenaries, but he also learned a thing or two while he was his father's blacksmithing assistant. "Oi! Open up! The Navy is only a few yards away!" They said, panicking. It was clear they didn't want them getting near and that they preferred to stay with ranged battle. Kaijo looked out, wanting to antagonize them. He loaded one of the cannons, and fired it towards the enemies. Until then the others were just knocking on the door, however once the cannon fired they would begin shooting and tackling it. "What are ya doin' in there?!" One shouted, as the door busted down. They would see their comrade dead, and Kaijo there with a freshly fired cannon. "Getting their attention." He would say. The shot had missed, that may have been the only reason they weren't returning fire. "If you want to make it out alive, I suggest you listen. We can handle them." He said, staring at the clearly angry Pirates who probably weren't going to believe a word that they said. "They're already coming, I made sure they knew we were a threat. Our only chance now is to release the rest of the mercenaries and fight. They've been helping me, a semi-known criminal. I can blackmail them into aiding us against the Navy, and if they don't we'll just lock them beneath the deck until we're finished." He said, finishing his proposal. However, one of them just wasn't having it, they charged towards Kaijo, swinging their sword downwards in an attempt to cut him down. However he merely parried with the Katana left behind, and with his other hand stabbed the man with the knife he had. "Anyone else got a problem with the plan?" he asked, the others still very clearly pissed. "Once this is done and over with, I'll be taking the survivors of my crew onto the Navy ship where we will sail off. You lot can keep the merchandise you looted, it won't affect me none."
He said, one sighing as he informed Kaijo he would run it by the captain. Kaijo glanced back outside, the marines were only a few minutes away. He began to make way for the deck, where he would see the captain. Rather simple and weak looking in appearance, he wore an angry scowl on his face after listening to his crew mate give him the proposal Kaijo had offered. Though with a sigh, he accepted. "Fine, we're already going to battle anyhow. Would be foolish to make two enemies. Talk to 'em then." Kaijo grinned, staring at the mercenaries. "Take the captain below deck, we'll meet with him after we finish this fight." He said, one of the pirates escorting the tied up merchant down beneath. "The rest of you mercs. You lot have been helping me for the past few islands -- you've been escorting a known criminal. I'm wanted on several islands for theft, and, one for murder. All islands that you've taken me to and from. You lot are nothing more than accomplices." He said. The only reason he was known for these was due to some surveillance most likely, otherwise he was completely stealthy. "Sorry to break it to you guys like this. You're gonna need to fight to get out, 'lest I'll argue tooth and nail to get the Navy to arrest you all if we fail. These guys will back me up. 'We hired this lot, they were with us pirates!' they'll argue. You guys don't have much of a case." He said, untying them. "We'll survive if you help us. Just fight, and I can guarantee us a vessel away from these pirates. They've already agreed we take the Navy ship."
The navy ship would sail directly next to the pirates, the rest went below deck. "Ready?" He whispered, the entirety of the Pirate crew and Mercs were underneath the main deck. The pirates were hesitant on this plan, though to live they accepted. There were bags of gunpowder hanging from the ceiling. A pirate lifted a torch, blowing a hole in the deck. Several others did too. Navy soldiers would begin to fall in, the deck almost completely collapsing from the explosions. The fallen Navy Soldiers would be stabbed and shot by the pirates beneath. This wasn't necessarily an advantage though, due to the falling derbies, however they were clearing winning thusfar. "Oi! What is going on down there!" Everyone heard this voice. An older man, with a deep rough voice. "Don't make me come down there and teach ya how it's done, soldiers!" He said, Kaijo figured that was the commander of these soldiers. "Everyone up there! We'll board their ship!" He shouted back. The Navy soldiers down here crippled to the point to where they couldn't pick up their weapons, or dead. The pirates climbed up, and ran to the deck. "Have some men back firing!" He shouted, gazing up at the Navy captain. "Cover the people climbing! We're going to take over the ship." He said, going over and climbing onto their ship alongwith the pirates that were aiding him. Soldiers who came to cut them down were being shot at by the Pirates who stayed back armed with guns. "That's their Captain!" The Navy captain said, pointing towards Kaijo. "Take him out!" Immediately almost, several Navy soldiers turned towards Kaijo. He unsheathed his blade, ready for battle. They charged him, some shot. He dodged the bullets as they flew, charging back towards his opponents. A melee hand to hand fighter attempted to come towards him, everyone of the soldiers paused. It would seem they were waiting for Kaijo to make the first move. He looked towards the Navy gunsmen, who were now preoccupied with the rest of the Pirates. "Get Kaijo!" The captain of the Navy shouted. "He's their Captain!"
That didn't work in their favor, however. They grew impatient due to their captain's ignorant shouting, the melee fighter launched the first punch. It was a simple hookshot. Kaijo stepped back, he had reach over the man due to his lengthy katana blade. He would swing it, counter attacking the man, cutting his upper arm. Another man came charging before Kaijo could follow up on his attack. This soldier was armed with a blade, and had swung it towards Kaijo. Kaijo would block, backing up the sword with his other arm by having it rest on the dull edge of the blade. He would then kicked towards his opponents legs, tripping them and bringing his blade down to their neck. "Oi!" One of the Navy soldiers shouted, sounding a little bit heartbroken by these actions. It was the fighter, probably a friend to the man. He launched a punch, and Kaijo would block it with the cutting edge of the sword. He then would swing once more towards the man, cutting his gut. Kaijo lifted his sword one last time, striking the man down.
Kaijo looked around - The pirates were winning but not without a few losses. He gazed at the dead body of several pirates and even more navy soldiers. The captain of the navy was on the den den mushi, more than likely reporting what was going on. No one seemed to be wanting to take the man on, though the fight was inevitable. They couldn't just save him for last, Kaijo raised his blade and prepared. The navy captain took notice. "Kaijo Okinaga.." He said, with a voice that somehow hinted the man was disappointed. "We thought you were a petty criminal, not a pirate. Either way, we had to take you in. You won't win, after I'm finished with you, I'll make way to your allies." Kaijo merely grinned, the man was full of himself. The captain was taller than Kaijo, and wielded dual swords. Annoying, he figured, but manageable. He would have to keep up with blocking two blades and still make time to attack.
The Captain would charge for him, Kaijo readied his sword and made for the first attack. He would thrust forward, as the man charged. He accepted the damage dealt, as Kaijo's blade pierced through the man's torso he would swing his blades down. To avoid it, he stepped forwards as much as he could. The height difference made it possible to keep out of the range of the blades. He would slide his right leg forward, behind the Captain's, and pull it back trying to trip the Captain. Successful in his attempt, he would put all of his weight into pushing himself forward, forcing the captain to the ground. He would take his sword again, unsheathing it from his body. Blood would begin to spew from his body, though he wasn't faltering. "We've been keeping an eye out for you for a while now. People've been bitchin' at my crew for not having found some 'petty thief.' We even had to waste the money to make you a wanted poster!" He said, explaining how he knew Kaijo existed. Very few people did, "Guess you finally got around to noticing me." He said, clashing blades with the captain. He had to juggle between the blades, as they both were swung towards Kaijo at separate times, making it hard to leave room to attack. He slid back, as the Captain swung downwards with his left hand. He moved to the captain's lefthand side, swinging his blade, leaving a cut on the man's arm. The captain would swing his left sword back in an attempt to cut Kaijo, who merely blocked with his blade once more. The man becoming more infuriated began to continuously strike at Kaijo, more and more, quicker and harder. His form was getting sloppy. He gazed around him, the Pirates were almost done. Once again, he thrust forward as the captain swung his blades in an attempt to cut Kaijo. This time he managed to pierce through the heart. He grinned, "I win." Kaijo whispered to the man, finally the battle was over. Most of the Navy were shocked, some kept fighting, but others caught off guard due to the surprise. It wouldn't be long before they were completely wiped out. He looked at the casualties, obviously the Pirate crew had lost many before the end of the fight. Their captain approached Kaijo. "Now, you're outnumbered." He said, upholstering his gun. "Gimme a reason to not shoot ya." Kaijo remained quiet, and placed the sword against the man's neck. "You get to keep the cargo, I got you out of a fight already. Common, you're men are tired and I'm sure ya wanna celebrate. This ship'll be tracked before long. Let us take it away from ya, get what you want here." He said to the Captain, who sighed in response. He was fully expecting a fight -- though he agreed and walked off. Must have been wanting to just get the day over with, nothing to gain in killing someone who had nothing now. The mercs fetched the captain of the merchant ship, Kaijo disabled any remaining surveillance on the ship. "Captain Bob! Come in!" He heard, the sound coming from a Den Den Mushi. He picked it up, grinning, and smiling towards a camera he assumed was sending video back to their base. "Oi! He's dead. I've killed him."
A pause was heard over the phone, muffled voices behind just out of the Mushi's earshot. They were more than likely discussing how to deal with this, though it just ended with 'What's your name?' "Kaijo Okinaga." He said, taking the infamy that came along with killing the Captain of this ship. They hung up afterwards, he merely crushed the communicator part. He planned on releasing the Den Den back into the wild later. He returned to the deck of the ship, informing them that they need to set sail now so they can leave before the Navy showed up.
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| | Subject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration Tue Sep 27, 2016 10:26 am | |
| - Kaijo Okinaga wrote:
- Crew: N/a Atm
Position: supernova
Tier: F
Activity: Very active.
Why: Lookin' for a spoopin' good time, figured I could do a lot from this position. Also figured a certain Yonko was hunting Supernovas, wouldn't mind fighting one later down the line.
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The day started peacefully. He woke early in the morning, his ship being guided by the few merchants he hired to sail him to the next Island. He was in need of a boat and planned to pick one up on the next island. For now, however, he was hiring merchants to carry him around. He managed to hide his not-so well known identity. He wasn't a very popular pirate, at the moment anyways. He didn't commit much crimes, he just polished what skills he could among the merchant ships where he would hitch a ride island to island. He would battle with mercenaries on board to pass the time, using both hand to hand combat and sword duels. He even helped them out by repairing a few blades of theirs, getting extra money on the side. He aided when Pirates would attempt to raid the Merchant's ship, he needed too, otherwise the Pirates would just kill him.
Today, however, was nice and quiet. No ships in sight. Just a calm ocean and a nice cool breeze to go along with the tranquility. The mercenaries were mostly asleep, save for the ones keeping an eye on the surroundings, and Kaijo was sitting back with a fishing pole in hand. Figured he would catch some fish during the calmer moments, help the chef and crew out by fetching more variety to their meals. "Storm in the distance!" a merc yelled from the crows nest. He shouted the direction, as Kaijo gazed eastward he could tell that a hell of a storm was coming. Luckily enough everyone here was trained to deal with storms, everyone began to prepare. Tightening down loose cargo with ropes, the crew would steady themselves by tying down to a nearby position, the person in the crows nest remained. Kaijo had to stop what little activity he could find the time to do, and aide in the preparations as well. It wouldn't take long, since the seas were calm and they saw the storm calming.
Wouldn't be longer than half an hour before the storm was overhead, they could have more than likely stalled it out for later however they began to turn towards it, and against the wind. The rain was light and there were few occurrences of thunder and lightning. The main issue was with the Wind. They were heading against it, which slowed down their pacing. The captain of the ship even argued that they wouldn't be able to meet on schedule due to the storm. Wouldn't be a problem, Kaijo figured. The captain could just use his Den Den mushi to call ahead and let them know when to expect it. Everything would have been fine. That was until he heard a bell ringing, three tones then a five second pause. The first time he heard the tones he panicked a bit. Three tones meant pirates were nearby, he was somewhat hoping he had missed a tone. But nope. Quickily, he surveyed the area around the ship. One was coming from the north. The were two men down in the cabin below, which would open fire on the ship.
It would be futile, however. The ship returned fire, and though seemingly there was no major damage to the ship, the cannons would stop firing. The pirates did, too. They began to forward towards the Merchant ship. A motor seemed to increase the speed of their ship, while the merchant ship ran solely based on sailing. It wouldn't be more than a moment before they were right along the merchant ship. The ship was much larger, and based on the howls of the crew cheering for new treasures, he could tell they were outnumbered as well. He hid, it was the best he could do. He went into a box stored with nothing but barrels, he made room for himself by throwing two overboard and lying in wait. The mercenaries were nothing once they boarded, they were beaten and taken aboard as slaves. The pirates began to take more and more merchandise from the ship, including the box Kaijo was in. The others were tied up. He was, indeed, in a pickle.
The pirates began to party, Kaijo was thrown below deck with the other supplies as he remained hidden in the box. There was a group of pirates down with him, listing off the loot, marking down what they got. Wouldn't be long before the box he was in would be opened. Using a knife he had on hand before the invasion, he would stab the man opening the box, before turning to the other two Pirates down below. He charged them, trying to remain as silent as possible. The two targets seemed speechless, yet at the same time drew their swords. Each ready for combat yet both panicking. The first one would swing their blade, he would duck under that and stab the man in the gut. The second one ran forward and swung downwards towards Kaijo, he backed away leaving his sword impaled into the man. He let out a cry for help, however the echoes of cheering and wailing above the deck made the cry seem mute. Kaijo grinned, taking on the remain soldier as the other one winched in pain. The pirate would swing downwards, Kaijo caught the incoming blade by holding onto the mans wrists. He would proceed to knee him in his stomach. Keeling over, the pirate would begin to stand back up. Kaijo would continuously kick the man until he was knocked unconscious. At this point he would walk over to the crying man. "Weak." He announced to him, before slitting his throat. The party going on above deck seemed to drain the noise made in the cargo hold.
Kaijo made a quick exit from the Cargo hold, leaving through a door that led to a hallway of sorts below the deck. He analyzed the ship trying to find some way off, though he wasn't very positive he could get off while below deck. Emergency ships seemed to be above deck, however he'd have to fight through a raid of pirates before being able to get there. No plan looked too great. However, he would begin to hear the sound of nothing. Absolutely nothing. Everything had stopped making noise, Kaijo would duck into one of the nearby rooms. The party above the deck had stopped, their celebration ceased and there was tones of the bell. Though he couldn't tell what they meant. More pirates, maybe?' He thought to himself. Maybe they were trying to get the drop on an enemy. Though if that were the case, maybe they wouldn't have announced themselves so easily during the storm. There would have had to have been something else that would shut the pirates up.
Before worrying about that, he ensured there was no one in the room. Unfortunately, there was. A single person remaining in the room. Luckily enough, however, they were sleeping. Kaijo would barricade the door, and eye the cannons. He could get a good enough view from around them, glimpsing to the outside world. However, first he needed to off the person maintaining them, sleeping over in a hammock in the corner. He would take out his knife that he had taken back from the pirate's gut, and slit the man's throat. He wanted to be as quiet as possible, what with the rest of the crew up top remaining quiet, no longer canceling out whatever sound he made, making it to where he needed to be more cautious.
With the door barricaded, he was free to take a look outside. He was quite alarmed to see a Navy ship off in the distance, headed this way. He was certain that they'd have noticed the ship, though he was surprised that no one was firing back. That's when it hit him, he was in the room they fire upon their enemies. They would be running down here soon only to notice they couldn't get in. He figured they would eventually break down the door, but after that they'd have to fight Kaijo -- by then the navy should have arrived and would be attacking on the deck.
He would hear a knock on the door. He prepared. The pirate manning the ship's guns, now dead, had left behind a single weapon. A katana blade. He could make use of this. Not only did he train slightly with the Mercenaries, but he also learned a thing or two while he was his father's blacksmithing assistant. "Oi! Open up! The Navy is only a few yards away!" They said, panicking. It was clear they didn't want them getting near and that they preferred to stay with ranged battle. Kaijo looked out, wanting to antagonize them. He loaded one of the cannons, and fired it towards the enemies. Until then the others were just knocking on the door, however once the cannon fired they would begin shooting and tackling it. "What are ya doin' in there?!" One shouted, as the door busted down. They would see their comrade dead, and Kaijo there with a freshly fired cannon. "Getting their attention." He would say. The shot had missed, that may have been the only reason they weren't returning fire. "If you want to make it out alive, I suggest you listen. We can handle them." He said, staring at the clearly angry Pirates who probably weren't going to believe a word that they said. "They're already coming, I made sure they knew we were a threat. Our only chance now is to release the rest of the mercenaries and fight. They've been helping me, a semi-known criminal. I can blackmail them into aiding us against the Navy, and if they don't we'll just lock them beneath the deck until we're finished." He said, finishing his proposal. However, one of them just wasn't having it, they charged towards Kaijo, swinging their sword downwards in an attempt to cut him down. However he merely parried with the Katana left behind, and with his other hand stabbed the man with the knife he had. "Anyone else got a problem with the plan?" he asked, the others still very clearly pissed. "Once this is done and over with, I'll be taking the survivors of my crew onto the Navy ship where we will sail off. You lot can keep the merchandise you looted, it won't affect me none."
He said, one sighing as he informed Kaijo he would run it by the captain. Kaijo glanced back outside, the marines were only a few minutes away. He began to make way for the deck, where he would see the captain. Rather simple and weak looking in appearance, he wore an angry scowl on his face after listening to his crew mate give him the proposal Kaijo had offered. Though with a sigh, he accepted. "Fine, we're already going to battle anyhow. Would be foolish to make two enemies. Talk to 'em then." Kaijo grinned, staring at the mercenaries. "Take the captain below deck, we'll meet with him after we finish this fight." He said, one of the pirates escorting the tied up merchant down beneath. "The rest of you mercs. You lot have been helping me for the past few islands -- you've been escorting a known criminal. I'm wanted on several islands for theft, and, one for murder. All islands that you've taken me to and from. You lot are nothing more than accomplices." He said. The only reason he was known for these was due to some surveillance most likely, otherwise he was completely stealthy. "Sorry to break it to you guys like this. You're gonna need to fight to get out, 'lest I'll argue tooth and nail to get the Navy to arrest you all if we fail. These guys will back me up. 'We hired this lot, they were with us pirates!' they'll argue. You guys don't have much of a case." He said, untying them. "We'll survive if you help us. Just fight, and I can guarantee us a vessel away from these pirates. They've already agreed we take the Navy ship."
The navy ship would sail directly next to the pirates, the rest went below deck. "Ready?" He whispered, the entirety of the Pirate crew and Mercs were underneath the main deck. The pirates were hesitant on this plan, though to live they accepted. There were bags of gunpowder hanging from the ceiling. A pirate lifted a torch, blowing a hole in the deck. Several others did too. Navy soldiers would begin to fall in, the deck almost completely collapsing from the explosions. The fallen Navy Soldiers would be stabbed and shot by the pirates beneath. This wasn't necessarily an advantage though, due to the falling derbies, however they were clearing winning thusfar. "Oi! What is going on down there!" Everyone heard this voice. An older man, with a deep rough voice. "Don't make me come down there and teach ya how it's done, soldiers!" He said, Kaijo figured that was the commander of these soldiers. "Everyone up there! We'll board their ship!" He shouted back. The Navy soldiers down here crippled to the point to where they couldn't pick up their weapons, or dead. The pirates climbed up, and ran to the deck. "Have some men back firing!" He shouted, gazing up at the Navy captain. "Cover the people climbing! We're going to take over the ship." He said, going over and climbing onto their ship alongwith the pirates that were aiding him. Soldiers who came to cut them down were being shot at by the Pirates who stayed back armed with guns. "That's their Captain!" The Navy captain said, pointing towards Kaijo. "Take him out!" Immediately almost, several Navy soldiers turned towards Kaijo. He unsheathed his blade, ready for battle. They charged him, some shot. He dodged the bullets as they flew, charging back towards his opponents. A melee hand to hand fighter attempted to come towards him, everyone of the soldiers paused. It would seem they were waiting for Kaijo to make the first move. He looked towards the Navy gunsmen, who were now preoccupied with the rest of the Pirates. "Get Kaijo!" The captain of the Navy shouted. "He's their Captain!"
That didn't work in their favor, however. They grew impatient due to their captain's ignorant shouting, the melee fighter launched the first punch. It was a simple hookshot. Kaijo stepped back, he had reach over the man due to his lengthy katana blade. He would swing it, counter attacking the man, cutting his upper arm. Another man came charging before Kaijo could follow up on his attack. This soldier was armed with a blade, and had swung it towards Kaijo. Kaijo would block, backing up the sword with his other arm by having it rest on the dull edge of the blade. He would then kicked towards his opponents legs, tripping them and bringing his blade down to their neck. "Oi!" One of the Navy soldiers shouted, sounding a little bit heartbroken by these actions. It was the fighter, probably a friend to the man. He launched a punch, and Kaijo would block it with the cutting edge of the sword. He then would swing once more towards the man, cutting his gut. Kaijo lifted his sword one last time, striking the man down.
Kaijo looked around - The pirates were winning but not without a few losses. He gazed at the dead body of several pirates and even more navy soldiers. The captain of the navy was on the den den mushi, more than likely reporting what was going on. No one seemed to be wanting to take the man on, though the fight was inevitable. They couldn't just save him for last, Kaijo raised his blade and prepared. The navy captain took notice. "Kaijo Okinaga.." He said, with a voice that somehow hinted the man was disappointed. "We thought you were a petty criminal, not a pirate. Either way, we had to take you in. You won't win, after I'm finished with you, I'll make way to your allies." Kaijo merely grinned, the man was full of himself. The captain was taller than Kaijo, and wielded dual swords. Annoying, he figured, but manageable. He would have to keep up with blocking two blades and still make time to attack.
The Captain would charge for him, Kaijo readied his sword and made for the first attack. He would thrust forward, as the man charged. He accepted the damage dealt, as Kaijo's blade pierced through the man's torso he would swing his blades down. To avoid it, he stepped forwards as much as he could. The height difference made it possible to keep out of the range of the blades. He would slide his right leg forward, behind the Captain's, and pull it back trying to trip the Captain. Successful in his attempt, he would put all of his weight into pushing himself forward, forcing the captain to the ground. He would take his sword again, unsheathing it from his body. Blood would begin to spew from his body, though he wasn't faltering. "We've been keeping an eye out for you for a while now. People've been bitchin' at my crew for not having found some 'petty thief.' We even had to waste the money to make you a wanted poster!" He said, explaining how he knew Kaijo existed. Very few people did, "Guess you finally got around to noticing me." He said, clashing blades with the captain. He had to juggle between the blades, as they both were swung towards Kaijo at separate times, making it hard to leave room to attack. He slid back, as the Captain swung downwards with his left hand. He moved to the captain's lefthand side, swinging his blade, leaving a cut on the man's arm. The captain would swing his left sword back in an attempt to cut Kaijo, who merely blocked with his blade once more. The man becoming more infuriated began to continuously strike at Kaijo, more and more, quicker and harder. His form was getting sloppy. He gazed around him, the Pirates were almost done. Once again, he thrust forward as the captain swung his blades in an attempt to cut Kaijo. This time he managed to pierce through the heart. He grinned, "I win." Kaijo whispered to the man, finally the battle was over. Most of the Navy were shocked, some kept fighting, but others caught off guard due to the surprise. It wouldn't be long before they were completely wiped out. He looked at the casualties, obviously the Pirate crew had lost many before the end of the fight. Their captain approached Kaijo. "Now, you're outnumbered." He said, upholstering his gun. "Gimme a reason to not shoot ya." Kaijo remained quiet, and placed the sword against the man's neck. "You get to keep the cargo, I got you out of a fight already. Common, you're men are tired and I'm sure ya wanna celebrate. This ship'll be tracked before long. Let us take it away from ya, get what you want here." He said to the Captain, who sighed in response. He was fully expecting a fight -- though he agreed and walked off. Must have been wanting to just get the day over with, nothing to gain in killing someone who had nothing now. The mercs fetched the captain of the merchant ship, Kaijo disabled any remaining surveillance on the ship. "Captain Bob! Come in!" He heard, the sound coming from a Den Den Mushi. He picked it up, grinning, and smiling towards a camera he assumed was sending video back to their base. "Oi! He's dead. I've killed him."
A pause was heard over the phone, muffled voices behind just out of the Mushi's earshot. They were more than likely discussing how to deal with this, though it just ended with 'What's your name?' "Kaijo Okinaga." He said, taking the infamy that came along with killing the Captain of this ship. They hung up afterwards, he merely crushed the communicator part. He planned on releasing the Den Den back into the wild later. He returned to the deck of the ship, informing them that they need to set sail now so they can leave before the Navy showed up.
It was an insightful read honestly I have no qualms. The story development was a little drab at points but for the most part it was basically up quite standards.
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Crew: Former king of Sandra kingdom ( N/A)
Position: supernova
Tier: 1
Activity: school don't start back for four weeks so alot
Why: Because I'm the real deal. Y'all would never have a supernova like me
NPC in here are made for the sample vice admiral rear admirals and Mafia boss and yes the Royal family of Sandra Also most of the PC supernovas haven't been on in months Blake since last year.
Skai
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Sample:Present time age thirty-five. Phase One
Over thirty royal guards walked around Trillion. He was in chains not sea stone chains just regular steel made chains. Walking in front of them was the now queen of Sandra Skai. Skai was Trillion younger half sister from their mother. As they walk down the hallway towards the outside a crowd could be heard cheering. Why was they cheering and why was queen Skai crying. Because today was the day her brother was to be put to death. He was being executed for killing the former king and price of Sandra. As they opened the giant gated doors the crowd became ever so loud. Trillion smiled as the sun beamed down over them. Trillion looked over at the crowd as they threw things and yelled names. Trillion was soon placed on his knees as queen Skai looked down sadly at him. Tunka today you is to be put to death for crimes not only in this kingdom but world wide as well. You betrayed this kingdom and even the world government. Who was even so nicely to give you the title of warlord. What do you say in your defense. Trillion started laughing just kept on shaking his head and heavy laughing. Skai looked at him with a sad grin, why do you laugh a happy laughter. Trillion looked than said, because if I knew what I know now back then I would have did way more. I would have broken the bar code hell I would have even sold you to slavery. Just might do it again if given the chance. Thank the heavens that bitch mother of ours is missing and that your brother and father is dead. I've got my wish oh yeah such a perfect wish. Because if you knew what I do you would have done the same thing. But to keep your family so-called honor in place I choose not to say a word. Skai looked at him but was too sad so sad she started to cry even hugging Trillion.She stood back up as the two soldiers got ready to slice his head off. Trillion started to remember how he got here in the first place.
Part-time age Fourteen
Aaaggh!!! A young Trillion was knocked on the floor by his step father yet again. A little bruise on his lip and a cut under his eye. This man was the king of Sandra Donkey Galloway. Damn you boy your nothing more than a walking displace an embarrassment to my marriage. That father of yours raped my wife your mother and hear you are how sickening. He walked away as Trillion was getting up off the floor as his half brother saw it all. His brother name was Icey and he was a major prick to Trillion. Wow my father really does hate you how sad. Yet so funny if I do say so myself. Trillion said nothing as he got up and walked it off.
One year later
This girl who was so perfect who had everyone attention was so beautiful so graceful she was Marvel. Most would think she was a earth angel.Sadly she was in love with both Trillion and Icey but could only be with only one of them. Skai was there as well however she showed a funny way of love to her brother Trillion she hates him she hates him not. However everywhere Trillion went somebody told him his life was a curse as Icey was a blessing. But Marvel and Skai gave him hope to live on. Marvel was a princess from another kingdom. It was to merge with Sandra to be strong enough to fight off the invading empire of Kappa.
The crowning ceremony came as Icey was being crowned the next King and their mother Magnificent was also there. Seeing such praise made Trillion sad as everyone acknowledge Icey existence yet no one showed that kind of love for him. Trillion had a one on one conversation with his mother that night. Trillion looked up at the stars than to his mother and said, Mother did you decide to give birth to me because you wanted too or it was against your views on life. Such a question took her by surprise as she said, does it matter your here now right. Besides you wasn't a product of rape but an affair. Most don't know this nor never will but in time some will. Such things stayed in the back of Trillion mind as he always wondered who the man was that father him. Thinking he would never leave his kids ever.
Three weeks later the Kappa troops was warring right into there kingdom castles. Marvel,Sksi,Icey and Trillion made it to the safe guard room. But the troops was trying to get in. There was two other doors leading out. One was to escape while the other was to trick whomever was after them. Trillion choosed to go right as Icey choosed to go left this sparked a much awaited fight. Why must you act like a child at such a time you fool. Trillion laughed than said, ha speak for your self we go right we just might live if we go left they will hunt us down. They went on and on until Skai stepped in. Listen he's right Trillion left is our best way out of hear right leads to a storage room where they will just take the treasure and not our lives. Marvel agreed this angered Trillion. Especially when Icey said he was the king and what he says goes. Trillion looked at Skai and said all sad like, why do you always pick his side for huh. Skai gently touched his face as she said, Because he's my brother that's why. this answer truly broke Trillion heart as he said, yeah well so am I. Clearly she favoured Icey more as the guards started to break down the door. They ran left as Trillion was in the back running he slowed down. He turned around unnoticed as he went the right way. Soon the guards broke down the door as they went after Icey side. Trillion made it to the treasure room and my was there treasure. He looked around than saw a box he shooked it as something was rolling around. He heard somebody coming has he hide. Soon as the chaos had died down the king was reported killed and the queen missing. This was saddened news for most as Icey took his place upon the throne. Skai told Trillion they needed to stick together more than ever. But Trillion wasn't feeling it as he soon left as well he left doing Skai birthday bash.
Age eighteen
It's been three years since he left home he still had that box from that time as well. Trillion was now a underboss to a Mafia family the Cologne. He did missions after missions gaining the reputation the restless hitman. But still he was unhappy there as well Trillion soon heard that the queen of Sandra was in town thinking it was Skai he went to see her. He made it threw all the guards only to find that it was in fact Marvel who was now married to the crippled Icey. She explained to him how they was in a losing war in she had to get away. The Kappa nation had taken Skai as well. But he didn't care to much it wasn't his problem. Marvel said the reason she came was because her located said that the power of the desert was in the town. This fact greatly shocked Trillion she told him the power was to give someone control over the desert. The location device sent them right to Trillion house right to the box. It was too quiet after that that you could hear a fly wing beat. Sandra has the box lock as Marvel kingdom had the key only together could it be open. Soon the box was open and there it was Trillion didn't even notice it but he had the sand sand fruit with him all this time. As they both reached for the devil fruit they hands touched relighting sparks. They made love that night over and over again . But when Marvel woke up the next day Trillion had skipped town with the fruit. She was heartbroken but Trillion gain the power to become a sand man
Age Twenty-three
Five years later Trillion had become a very powerful and deadly pirate. Trillion reputation was so vast that he was given the title warlord after he killed five rear admirals and one vice admiral. Many feared him as those back at Sandra would fear he'll return to crush them. Trillion clashed with other vice admirals and warlords as well. Losing once only to a admiral.
Age twenty-five
Two years later Trillion went to the Kappa kingdom whom was now part of the world government. However he didn't care as he kill the three princes sold the princess to slavery well traded her for two mermaids. He was soon crowned the new king of Kappa. Most if not all thought this would mean the end of the long bloodthirsty war but no he made it worse. He forced people to join the army in into slavery. Those who made fun of him was killed by quick sand. He soon easily took control of Sandra by beating Icey the king to death. Nobody could stop him he was seemingly unstoppable with that devil fruit. But after he did what he did he saw Marvel she had a daughter about seven her name was Dawn. Do you see none of this would have happened if they listen to me I've lived a very sad life. But happiness is finally coming to me.
Age twenty-eight
Three years later doing this time much has happened Trillion stopped the war in merged the warring kingdoms together to form New Sandra. Marvel still haven't forgive Trillion but he didn't care. One day Dawn waste water on Trillion causing him to become hard this event would change things for the better. As a cry for help a much honer vice admiral was in town. They staged a coop as nearly every one turned on the dictator of New Sandra. Using rain dust to cause it to rain greatly weaken Trillion as he was at his defeat Marvel pointed her sea stone sword at Trillion clearly was able to kill him. Dawn arrived just to see it happen. Go on kill me I'm tire of this life anyhow. She looked as she placed the cuffs on him than said, no because then Dawn will be fatherless because of her mother and I don't want that so I won't kill you. This news greatly shocked Trillion as he realized Dawn was a product of an affair he had with Marvel. He soon remember what his mother said seeing what his mother did is no different than what him and Marvel did. Soon word got out that the warlord was dictating Sandra caused mass slave trades and killed many. He was striped of his warlord title and was to be sent to Impel Down level six. However Sandra new council decided to put him on death row.
Two years later thirty
Trillion been in chains for quite some time waiting on his death date Marvel left the country to hide her shame as Dawn was now twelve and such a beautiful young lady. She would come to his cell nearly everyday to ask him questions. She was the only one he would talk to. He told her he became a pirate to follow after the Heaven Winter pirates to get with all the females and beat up all the males. But they had went missing after the death of the pirate King such news broke his heart. So with that his dreams died he smiled as he told her to follow her dreams no matter what.he didn't speak for the next five years. Trillion just wanted to surpass the pirate King in short.
Present time age thirty-five
Just as he was about to be executed he over heard the three rear admirals talking. It's bad enough the pirate King has returned at least withh the Golden Dragon gone that's one less problem. Trillion looked up as he heard that. You mean to tell me the pirate King is alive oh my god my dreams I could surpass them now. So if my dreams not dead why should I be.
Just than his head was chopped off as sand splashed down. People rejoiced until his body stood up shocking most people yelling get the water. His head soon became one again with his body as he turned into sand knocking over the guards. Grabbing the rear admiral by the neck he said, just where are the Heaven Winter pirates at this moment. The rear admiral told Trillion about what had happened at the tea party this put a big smile on his face. As he caused a freak sand storm he began to walk away again. Skai yelled at him with all that power why be a bad guy. Trillion smiled as he began to blow away with the wind in said, the hell I look like saving a whore I rather be a villain. I've spent seven years chained up waiting on death an for the life of me. I just couldn't find a reason to escape or live for. but now this news has come I got new plans understand me.
He soon escaped Sandra by using the sand news broke out that ex warlord the Golden Dragon Tunka was at large he was last seen in Sandra in might be in the new world hiding. He is dangerous and at this moment count as a supernova because of his threat level beware.
It's been seven years the world forgotten about me. I guess I'll have to make them remember how terrifying the Golden Dragon of Sandra is besides the forecast said it was going to be the biggest sandstorm yet.
Phase Two
It been three full weeks since the Sand-Man Tunka escaped and been hiding in the new world. News of this went across the world pretty fast. New world bounty hunters and marine alike tried to capture him but Everytime it was stopped. They was killed by being crushed to death by sand or dehydration and that brings us to the Lucky bar on a lawless island. The bar was known to house big shot criminals and what not as it was a motel as well. Only the strong can survive there. However the scenery was very bloody as bounty hunters and marine soldiers was laid out all over the bar. Blood soaked sand yuck only three people was still alive or conscious. The Sand-Man Tunka a mystery woman and a young waiter. As Tunka lit his cigar he blow smoke as the woman looked on. She was known for her many raids on other families and pirates. She was the new underboss of the cologne family. Her name was Jupiter the star mistress. But back then she wasn't very known being that Tunka was the underboss at the time.
She looked at him and said, my oh my it been years has it not since we've set down like this. Every since you left the family we been watching you. Your actions everything you became a warlord hell even a king with that power of yours. We could be no we could run the mafia with such might what do you say. Tunka looked at her for a clean ten minutes than answered. I'm done with the mafia ain't nothing there y'all could offer me got it. She smiled at him a lovely grinning smile, my oh my you've been at large for three weeks now at least am I right. You see we could work together you have something I need and I have something you want. He got up and started to walk off, there's nothing you got that I could ever want Jupiter. She licked her lips than said, oh supernova Tunka I have information on where a map is to a ancient weapon recipe. It's power was said to blow things up.
He stopped than turned back around as he sat back down, keep talking now you got my attention. She laughed at his quick response, that's so like you to change your mind when you get something you want. Anyways the ancient recipe is well how can I put it a purple like substance. It's said if made right it could do some real damage. He looked on at her so tell me where can I find it and how can I get it. She open a map and showed him a lay out of a casino.
Here it's here at a ex vice president of the mafia company casino. The thing is I need power to get in there power like yours. You see it's a place surrounded by sand you could easily storm the place. But ex president Homer is no fool he is protected by the government so he has three rear admirals guarding the place. So your in or what.
Tunka looked at her with a joker smiled letting her know he good for it. Looking over at the waiter they ask for the bill the waiter said it was on the house as Jupiter said very well and wise.
One month passed as the operation to rob the casino took place. Tunka nearly wiped out all the guards as only one rear admiral was remaining. He fired shot after shot at Tunka as it only burst upon impact on his sand body. Homer looked on terrified. Damn the rumors are true this supernova is crazy he attacked this place single handedly what the hell man I don't want to die.
Tunka smiled as he knocked him threw a wall grabbing hold of Homer. Alright old man open up the vault and I'll let you live. I won't ask a second time. Ex president Homer soon open the vault revealing the recipe book of the ancient weapon and the Ocean Pearl. So Homer was in Tunka hand as he blasted him out the window causing him to fall to his death. As Tunka was walking out he saw Jupiter and her men. Well Sand-Man this is where you died this little act you did today will surely make you a mafia target. But if I kill you I'll be a family boss and be rewarded by the government. Now gentleman kill him make it quick quite and painless . The soldiers looked at her than started smiling as she was wondering why they wasn't doing anything. You see your too cheap Jupiter you always have been. I decided to pay these soldiers your soldiers this very pearl. It will fetch them at least thirty mill. Now my new pirate crew kill her but make it slow painful and loud.
As Tunka was walking she said, your nothing more than a snake in the water you a fucking crocodile. He smiled as he went on about his business.
Phase Three
Back at marine headquarters a young woman was reading the news seeing Tunka face in it yet again. This woman was the one who stopped him once. She was vice admiral Jovonna Style her reputation was vast as she ranked up fast being twenty-eight and hold a vice admiral title. She balled the paper up as she started to walk to her ship angry. Damn that Sand-Man Tunka I should have killed him back then damn it all. If he not pissing off the world government he pissing off the under world. A guy like him shouldn't be around for much longer. I swear he killed some of my closes friends. I'll have his head.
She made it to her ship as she got there it was two more rear admirals waiting on her and a new captain who was making a name for herself. Jovonna didn't have to ask what they wanted she knew it already. They was hear to get Sand-Man Tunka a supernova whom been on a rampage as of late..
Tunka smiled as he held up the dyna stone after raiding yet another marine armoury house. But for what reason did he want them for was unknown.
Ten days later the clouds was starting to get dark getting ready to storm. Finally vice admiral Jovonna located the Sand pirates and their captain. It was a battle from the beginning as both leaders looked at each other. The young marine captain held her head down bitting her lip.
I'm bringing this to a end your going to die today. You did too much how could you run out of order like this. He laughed as he blow smoke, well yeah I ranned out of order but I'm still full of chaos. I was titled a warlord of the sea a king of a kingdom and now a supernova how painful. People forgotten about me yet again. This time I'm about to do something that would make them never forget me and always remember what I did. When I'm done here the world will know I was hear.
She than said your listed as a supernova trust me the world already knows your hear as cannon fire was heard the battle of the Trillion's had begun.
Screaming ,gun shots and loud booms could be heard as swords was clashing. Bodies falling off the ships as each one was on fire. The water below was turning red and black from the oil and blood. The young marine captain was dashing and clashing any pirate she saw. Her pink hair blowing in the wind this young girl was none other than Trillion Trilla Skai. Who joined the marines to stop her father. As she slashed down she could she her father trading blows with the vice admiral however his sand powers was giving him the upper hand. She started to run towards them.. Trillion looked down at the wounded Jovonna as she was shot and had broken bones. Well well well this time you won't beat me. I've got other things to do and dying ain't one of them. He raised his hand up as he was getting ready to proud her head in. Just than sea water was thrown on him as she sliced him with her sword. Jovonna quickly punched him back. As she fell back down Tunka slowly got up smiling. Damn you've grown you look just like her baby girl. holding on to her sword tightly she took a deep breath, father no Sand-Man Tunka your under arrest. Try as you might but your going down. He laughed just as he was about to say something he saw five war ships coming. He looked at her, I'll love to stay in catch up but I got bigger things to do. I'm sorry things turned out this way Skai I really am well bye baby girl bye. Sand hurricane he cooked up a sand storm as he took the dyna stones and fled on a smaller size boat. Skai looked over as she wave down the war ships.
Finally that stupid bitch Jovonna such a problem woman. This is but a minor setback yeah I just lost my crew but they was nothing special. I still got the dyna stones. This will please them dearly but I have a new goal now and that goal is to become the new pirate king and that's facts.
As he started to close his eye he remembered seeing the pirate king head getting cut off this moment would later inspire him to take the now empty title.
Supernovas Trillion Trilla Tunka drifted off laying low for now.
Fin
[/color] As painful as it was to read at times due to the choice of grammar and phrasing, it was actually enjoyable tbh. My only thing is everything he's done in his career outshines being a Supernova in all quite honesty. Your stories scope while being good, is too grandiose. No way a former Warlord could be a Supernova, he's no longer a rookie, defeats the point of the title. However, it leaves me with the odd predicament of what to do, my decisions is as follows:
I won't make give you the title of Supernova.
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| | Subject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration Sat Oct 08, 2016 12:17 am | |
| I feel like i get easily replaced around here. That's probably bad karma for being away. As bothersome as it is i'll just do this again too. Crew: Dream Eater Pirates Position: Supernova Tier: 1? Activity: Can get on in the minimun once a day. Why: Want to get back up in the ranks with other pirates. Sample: - RP Sample:
Eiichi and Fly had embarked on an island located in the south completely surrounded by a odd looking fog. He walked through the fog filled forest which emmited disembodied noises coming from all around him, Fly hid inside Eiichi's coat as they went on. Eiichi himself was getting spooked at this point and hurried through it, eventually he made it through the end of the forest and saw the lights of a town standing on the top of a clift with a swamp below it. There was a stairway besides the clift leading up towards the town. It was a tricky way to get there since between him and the stairway stood the mighty swamp. Eiichi looked at his surroundings and got a hollow tree and placed it on the water. He took a branch and used it as a paddle to move the hollow tree so he could get to the other side.
He jumped off the branch and onto the soil in the other side, he made his way to the stairway and walked up it. He made it to the city on the top of the clift and headed into the tavern located on it. As he entered he was greeted by the smell of booze and meat all over the place. Pirates inside were shouting at each other, laughing together and most had passed drunk on their chairs or on the floor. Eiichi chuckled a bit seeing other pirates being so carefree inside there, Fly peered his head out of the coat at chirped. Eiichi took a seat on the tavern's stall and Fly flew and stood on his shoulder. The bartender shifted towards him and asked him what he wanted. "A glass of milk for me and the little guy, and why not throw in some of the meat you got in this place." He smiled as he placed the beli into the counter. The bartender turned around to pour the milk into the glasses and noticed the kid's face on one of the posters hung on the wall "The meat will be out in a minute. You're very well known, I'm surprised a pirate like you is all the way on an island like this one." he said as he placed the glasses of milk infont of them.
"Well a friend of mine back home recommended me this place if i ever wanted to just take a break and let lose for a while to get some time without worries." He rubbed Fly's head while Fly drank milk. "Whatever friend you're talking about must've have good taste, He wasn't wrong. Mystery Island is a safe stop for pirates from all around, Marines stay distant from this island cause of the enviroment. We're lucky to have friendly pirates share food and doing us favors for beli to keep this town alive and running!" The bartender laughed. Eiichi smiled and laughed with him, as he calmed down he took a sip of milk and glanced around the place as the time passed. The bartender brought in the meat and gave it to him. "Here you go, hope the wait was worth it and enjoy!" Eiichi and Fly drooled as they watched the meat. "Thanks for the food!" Eiichi shouted as he placed his hands together and then grabbed the meat. He split the piece of meat in two, he ate one half and Fly ate the other.
They were done eating and were both already tired, the bartender approached them "There's a hotel nearby if you folks decide to stay the night." he suggested. Eiichi and Fly looked at each other confused and unaware that it was already night time until the bartender pointed it out. After thinking about it Eiichi nodded and figured he might as well go for the hotel. "Thanks again for the food old man, If it means anything i'll do whatever in my power to help this town out. So if anything happens do give me a call on my transponder snail." he smiled. He stood up and went outside the tavern as Fly flew right besides him, he went toward the tall building and on his way there he saw an old lady being bothered by some little kids. One of the kids was trying to pull the old lady's purse as she desperately tried to hold the purse back but failed. Eiichi walked over to them and with no warning hit the kids with his knuckle turned into rock "Children should respect their elders, without them we most likely wouldn't even be here. No give the nice lady her purse back and say you're sorry. he ordered. The kids looked away with their face pout face, Eiichi got annoyed and raised his fist covered in rock. The kids quickly apologized to the old lady and ran away.
The old lady was grateful and thanked Eiichi for what they've done and left. They made their way toward the hotel and while inside they rented a room for the night and went inside of it quickly. Eiichi dropped himself onto the bed already pretty tired and started to think about going on a short vacation on that place. Fly landed on one of the pillows and layed there looking at Eiichi. "I know, I know, I'll turn off the lights. Goodnight buddy." Eiichi reached towards the lamp and turned it off.
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| | Subject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration Sat Oct 08, 2016 3:11 am | |
| - Heartsmith wrote:
- I feel like i get easily replaced around here. That's probably bad karma for being away. As bothersome as it is i'll just do this again too.
Crew: Dream Eater Pirates
Position: Supernova
Tier: 1?
Activity: Can get on in the minimun once a day.
Why: Want to get back up in the ranks with other pirates.
Sample:
- RP Sample:
Eiichi and Fly had embarked on an island located in the south completely surrounded by a odd looking fog. He walked through the fog filled forest which emmited disembodied noises coming from all around him, Fly hid inside Eiichi's coat as they went on. Eiichi himself was getting spooked at this point and hurried through it, eventually he made it through the end of the forest and saw the lights of a town standing on the top of a clift with a swamp below it. There was a stairway besides the clift leading up towards the town. It was a tricky way to get there since between him and the stairway stood the mighty swamp. Eiichi looked at his surroundings and got a hollow tree and placed it on the water. He took a branch and used it as a paddle to move the hollow tree so he could get to the other side.
He jumped off the branch and onto the soil in the other side, he made his way to the stairway and walked up it. He made it to the city on the top of the clift and headed into the tavern located on it. As he entered he was greeted by the smell of booze and meat all over the place. Pirates inside were shouting at each other, laughing together and most had passed drunk on their chairs or on the floor. Eiichi chuckled a bit seeing other pirates being so carefree inside there, Fly peered his head out of the coat at chirped. Eiichi took a seat on the tavern's stall and Fly flew and stood on his shoulder. The bartender shifted towards him and asked him what he wanted. "A glass of milk for me and the little guy, and why not throw in some of the meat you got in this place." He smiled as he placed the beli into the counter. The bartender turned around to pour the milk into the glasses and noticed the kid's face on one of the posters hung on the wall "The meat will be out in a minute. You're very well known, I'm surprised a pirate like you is all the way on an island like this one." he said as he placed the glasses of milk infont of them.
"Well a friend of mine back home recommended me this place if i ever wanted to just take a break and let lose for a while to get some time without worries." He rubbed Fly's head while Fly drank milk. "Whatever friend you're talking about must've have good taste, He wasn't wrong. Mystery Island is a safe stop for pirates from all around, Marines stay distant from this island cause of the enviroment. We're lucky to have friendly pirates share food and doing us favors for beli to keep this town alive and running!" The bartender laughed. Eiichi smiled and laughed with him, as he calmed down he took a sip of milk and glanced around the place as the time passed. The bartender brought in the meat and gave it to him. "Here you go, hope the wait was worth it and enjoy!" Eiichi and Fly drooled as they watched the meat. "Thanks for the food!" Eiichi shouted as he placed his hands together and then grabbed the meat. He split the piece of meat in two, he ate one half and Fly ate the other.
They were done eating and were both already tired, the bartender approached them "There's a hotel nearby if you folks decide to stay the night." he suggested. Eiichi and Fly looked at each other confused and unaware that it was already night time until the bartender pointed it out. After thinking about it Eiichi nodded and figured he might as well go for the hotel. "Thanks again for the food old man, If it means anything i'll do whatever in my power to help this town out. So if anything happens do give me a call on my transponder snail." he smiled. He stood up and went outside the tavern as Fly flew right besides him, he went toward the tall building and on his way there he saw an old lady being bothered by some little kids. One of the kids was trying to pull the old lady's purse as she desperately tried to hold the purse back but failed. Eiichi walked over to them and with no warning hit the kids with his knuckle turned into rock "Children should respect their elders, without them we most likely wouldn't even be here. No give the nice lady her purse back and say you're sorry. he ordered. The kids looked away with their face pout face, Eiichi got annoyed and raised his fist covered in rock. The kids quickly apologized to the old lady and ran away.
The old lady was grateful and thanked Eiichi for what they've done and left. They made their way toward the hotel and while inside they rented a room for the night and went inside of it quickly. Eiichi dropped himself onto the bed already pretty tired and started to think about going on a short vacation on that place. Fly landed on one of the pillows and layed there looking at Eiichi. "I know, I know, I'll turn off the lights. Goodnight buddy." Eiichi reached towards the lamp and turned it off.
I'll permit this reinstatement as a Supernova, I'll keep my eyes on you. Current levels remain the same, position permitted. | |
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