Takuji Kaima: The Paladin (Tracker)

Character Name: Takuji E. Kaima.
Link to Approved Character Takuji Kaima
Affiliation: Pirate
Crew: -
Occupation: Paladin
Rank|Level: (C - Level 25)
Bounty|Reputation: 110,625,000
World Position: 5th Supernova.


Attack:

• Strength: 1
  
• Accuracy: 0
  
• Capacity: 0
  

Defense:

• Cognizance: 1
  
• Willpower: 1
  

Speed:

• Velocity: 2
  
• Acceleration: 2
  
• Maneuverability:   2
  

Hit Points:

• Immune System: 0
  
• Adaptability: 0
  

Vitality:
C-B Rank: 250 VP
VPR(Vitality Recovery Rate):  15% per Post.


Link to Primary Skill Set: Crusader Style
Link to Secondary Skill Set: (Place link!)
Link to Tertiary Skill Set: (Place link!)
Haki Aura: Cobalt
Devil Fruit: N/A


Weapons:

Swords:

Armor: -
Ships: -
Pets|Companions:
Abigail Spring
Amaya Tomoko

Misc.
Treasure Map Piece (1/5)



Completed Topics: The Lead (Solo Task)
Completed Topics This Tier: The Lead (Solo Task)

All good n' stuff for now~ You know the drill, any further updates to stats and category points can be handled here~~~

Request: Updating Tracker
Reasoning for Update:
Adding Companions + Skillset links:

Crusader Style (Skill-set)
Abigail Spring (Companion)
Amaya Tomoko (Companion)

Takuji wrote:

Request: Updating Tracker
Reasoning for Update:
Adding Companions + Skillset links:

Crusader Style (Skill-set)
Abigail Spring (Companion)
Amaya Tomoko (Companion)

Permitted, add them in!

Added!

Okay! Takuji, here on Jeweled Seas the Grader's choice of rubic grading is pretty much up to them but here's how I grade!

Was the story engaging? Very much so. I love the relationship between Taku, Ama and Abi. Though, I felt like I fell more for Ama's character's than Abi's. I enjoyed the transitional moments where you were travelling through the desert, how you confronted the angle of not wanting to kill them etc, that was truly sticking to your characters nature, the contrast and the conflict.

How could've it been better? One tiny thing is the action. I would've liked a little more engagement but seeing as these guys were literally levels below you, I'll leave that for more difficult threads.

Rewards:

Before Bonus: 200k Beli | 500,000 Bounty Awarded | Treasure Map Piece 1/5 (Please place this piece in your tracker. Once you've collected all 5 pieces, you'll gain something pretty cool~ Hehe)

After the Supernova Bonus:Before Bonus: 250k Beli | 625,000 Bounty Awarded | Treasure Map Piece 1/5 (Please place this piece in your tracker. Once you've collected all 5 pieces, you'll gain something pretty cool~ Hehe)

Added in bounty + completed task / treasure map piece!