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PostSubject: Staff #2 (thunderbolt)   Staff #2 (thunderbolt) EmptyWed Sep 09, 2015 7:25 am

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Equipment Name:staff#2 ( thunderbolt)
Class: F
Type:  Staff
Equipment Significance: combat purposes

Description: The staff is 4 feet long and weight 3lbs. It is use to generate a small electronic shock. It looks like a metal pole it a tbunder cloud on it


Strengths: It can create small shocks when touched.

Weaknesses: the electric shock is fairly weak and no stronger then 3 volts,..


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PostSubject: Re: Staff #2 (thunderbolt)   Staff #2 (thunderbolt) EmptyThu Sep 10, 2015 3:02 am

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PostSubject: Re: Staff #2 (thunderbolt)   Staff #2 (thunderbolt) EmptySat Sep 12, 2015 11:18 pm

Corrections are in RED.

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Equipment Name:staff#2 ( thunderbolt)
Class: F
Type:  Staff
Equipment Significance: combat purposes

Description: The staff is 4 feet long and weight 3lbs. It is use to generate a small electronic shock. It looks like a metal pole it a tbunder cloud on it


Strengths: It can shock a target to infect pain but its shock is no stranger then that of 3 volts ( the same amount uses to power a television or lightbulb)

Weaknesses: the electric shock is fairly weak and no stronger then a tazer gun. - I believe taser gun have more volts than 3 volts. I been tazed before and it was not a pleasant experience. Imagine charley horse all over your body plus the shocking lol. Anyways, please fix the weakness.
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PostSubject: Re: Staff #2 (thunderbolt)   Staff #2 (thunderbolt) EmptySun Sep 13, 2015 7:52 am

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PostSubject: Re: Staff #2 (thunderbolt)   Staff #2 (thunderbolt) EmptySun Sep 13, 2015 11:05 am

Change the strength or the weakness. Defibrillators are a lot stronger than 3 volts. The problem is that you stating that the shock is no stronger than that of 3 volts, however, weakness states "shock is no stronger than a revival shocker." aka, defibrillators, which is a lot stronger than 3 volts.

You can state in your strength that it causes small shock when touched; and for your weakness, state the shock is no stronger than that of 3 volts.

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Equipment Name:staff#2 ( thunderbolt)
Class: F
Type:  Staff
Equipment Significance: combat purposes

Description: The staff is 4 feet long and weight 3lbs. It is use to generate a small electronic shock. It looks like a metal pole it a tbunder cloud on it


Strengths: It can shock a target to infect pain but its shock is no stranger then that of 3 volts ( the same amount uses to power a television or lightbulb)

Weaknesses: the electric shock is fairly weak and no stronger then a revival shocker. The gun the doctors use to shock hearts into working again..
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PostSubject: Re: Staff #2 (thunderbolt)   Staff #2 (thunderbolt) EmptySun Sep 13, 2015 11:33 am

Approved.

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Equipment Name:staff#2 ( thunderbolt)
Class: F
Type:  Staff
Equipment Significance: combat purposes

Description: The staff is 4 feet long and weight 3lbs. It is use to generate a small electronic shock. It looks like a metal pole it a tbunder cloud on it


Strengths: It can create small shocks when touched.

Weaknesses: the electric shock is fairly weak and no stronger then 3 volts,..
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