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Ultra Combo
Berries : 625,000 Posts : 33
| Subject: The Lady in Shackles Sat Sep 30, 2017 11:17 pm | |
| Task Title: Lady in Shackles Class Task: D Class Task Requirements: Solo; 200 Words Minimum; Break target out of jail. Task Location: Yukiro Island Task Description: Our wannabe pirate Olympia is in need of a crew. After a few hours of eavesdropping and interrogating, she found out that a notorious ex-marine is now in jail due to an unknown reason, awaiting trail. This was enough to interest her and create the idea of busting into said jail and break out the ex-marine, and hopefully get them to join her crew. Fingers crossed, she doesn't die.
Inside are just normal city law enforcement, and there's a chance that the convict will lend a hand in the jail break.
Last edited by Ultra Combo on Sun Oct 01, 2017 9:01 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
| | | Azure Snow The Owner
Position : Marine Captain Berries : 135,000 Posts : 1075
Skill Sheet Skill 1: Heaven's Nodachi Skill 2: Gun Blade Style Skill 3:
| Subject: Re: The Lady in Shackles Sun Oct 01, 2017 3:07 am | |
| '300 Words Minimum per post' - Not sure if this is ready to be Approved yet but a bit of warning- The more important NPC's Stats in this task will be at least equal to a level 20. The lesser NPC would be around a level 15 range. | |
| | | Ultra Combo
Berries : 625,000 Posts : 33
| Subject: Re: The Lady in Shackles Sun Oct 01, 2017 9:01 pm | |
| Changed it so it scales to my level. :'D | |
| | | Azure Snow The Owner
Position : Marine Captain Berries : 135,000 Posts : 1075
Skill Sheet Skill 1: Heaven's Nodachi Skill 2: Gun Blade Style Skill 3:
| Subject: Re: The Lady in Shackles Sun Oct 01, 2017 11:47 pm | |
| Approved. - Ultra Combo wrote:
- Task Title: Lady in Shackles
Class Task: D Class Task Requirements: Solo; 200 Words Minimum; Break target out of jail. Task Location: Yukiro Island Task Description: Our wannabe pirate Olympia is in need of a crew. After a few hours of eavesdropping and interrogating, she found out that a notorious ex-marine is now in jail due to an unknown reason, awaiting trail. This was enough to interest her and create the idea of busting into said jail and break out the ex-marine, and hopefully get them to join her crew. Fingers crossed, she doesn't die.
Inside are just normal city law enforcement, and there's a chance that the convict will lend a hand in the jail break. | |
| | | Ultra Combo
Berries : 625,000 Posts : 33
| Subject: Re: The Lady in Shackles Fri Oct 13, 2017 9:33 pm | |
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| | | Nuxxon (Valentine)
Berries : 640,000 Posts : 67
| Subject: Re: The Lady in Shackles Sat Oct 14, 2017 6:59 am | |
| Alright. Some feedback if you want it, either take it or leave it: - Spoiler:
It was kind of hard following the characters without the lines of dialog being colored, plus the whole fact of me not following the two characters and being able to distinguish who was who (It actually took a bit before I understood a few of these lines of text.).
Other than that it looks good, a few insignificant spelling errors as I clearly understood what everything said and mostly just thought of the correct word before brushing it off.
Overall, good work.
And here is thy rewards (Which will be added to your profile a few minutes after this post is up). If you want stats distributed from the level you just got (3 points) just post a reply in your tracker whenever listing sources of exp and where I should put the points before putting it in the help desk to increase my speed to get to it. +100EXP +10,000 Berries +1 D Tier Treasure Dice (Result of which will be in the next post from this one) + 4,500,000 Bounty
Last edited by Nuxxon (Valentine) on Sat Oct 14, 2017 7:01 am; edited 1 time in total | |
| | | Destiny
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| Subject: Re: The Lady in Shackles Sat Oct 14, 2017 6:59 am | |
| The member ' Nuxxon (Valentine)' has done the following action : Dice Rolls
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