Melony Porter

Full Name:Melony porter
Alias/Epithet:Elemelon
Age:19
Gender:female
Race:(Human)
Sexuality:Bi
Origin: Canada, currently lives in the USA
Affiliation: Gesellschaft
Classifications:
+Main: Blaster
+Secondary: Shaker
+Third: Striker



General Appearance:
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Blue(red contacts)
Skin Tone: Pale skin
Height:5 foot 8
Weight:150 lbs
Tattoo:N/A



Personality:Melony’s personality comes down to raw emotion. She says what she feels and has no shame in it. She can only lie if she absolutely has to, and has no fear of the repercussions if she’s talking to someone randomly on the street. She isn’t an asshole, however, as she usually has nice things to say. Usually. If you get on her bad side she will insult you at every given chance, and it's not hard to do that. However she won't hate everyone forever, and it's fairly easy to get back to her good side. The same goes for her being nice: It's easy to get on her bad side. Of course, there are always exceptions to the rule, but mostly this is the norm.

She is in good physical shape due to morning jogs, which she does everyday on the same route without fail. She tends to get nervous, but it only happens a bit more than the average person. She tries not to let it show though, however it doesn't always work as she has some visual ticks that show this off. She hates being isolated and loves talking to people. She craves social interaction and is out of the house more times than not. In fact, she isn't in her apartment all that often, so it tends to be fairly neat, though a bit dusty.

Personality Quirks: When she gets nervous, she scratches her arms a lot. She also tends to be very touchy-feely
Likes: Physical Contact, people, power, life, death of non-powered
Dislikes: Lack of people in an area, death of friends and family, non-powered people, an over-abundance of nature(forests are a good example)
Motivations: To see Gesellschaft achieve their end goals and murder as many nonpowered individuals as possible
Fears: Herself dying, Torture, Earthquakes


Home Town: Toronto(lives in California)


Face Claim: Lina Inverse(Slayers)
Voice Claim: N/A

I need you to fix just a few things before I can approve you: See the Bold sections for problems and italics for suggestions / requests.

Melony wrote:

Full Name:Melony porter
Alias/Epithet:Elemelon
Age:19
Gender:female
Race:(Human)
Sexuality:Bi
Origin: Canada, currently lives in the USA
Affiliation: Villain - Please state if Independant or with a Group for the sake of clarity.

Classifications:
+Main: Blaster
+Secondary: Shaker
+Third: Brute
(You are allowed Three Classifications total. Your main can be used to its 100% Capacity, Secondary can be used up to 75% and your Third can only be used up to 50% Capacity. [url=COMING SOON][Character Classifications Thread][/url] ) - Please remove this.



General Appearance:
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Blue(red contacts)
Skin Tone: Pale skin
Height:5 foot 8
Weight:150 lbs
Tattoo:N/A



Personality:Melony’s personality comes down to raw emotion. She says what she feels and has no shame in it. She can only lie if she absolutely has to, and has no fear for the repercussions if she’s talking to someone randomly on the street. She isn’t an asshole however, as she usually has nice things to say. Usually. If you get on her bad side she will insult you at every given chance, and it's not hard to do that. However she won't hate everyone forever, and it's fairly easy to get back to her good side. The same goes for her being nice: It's easy to get on her bad side. Of course, there are always exceptions to the rule, but mostly this is the norm.

She is in good physical shape due to morning jogs, which she does everyday on the same route without fail. She tends to get nervous, but it only happens a bit more then the average person. She tries not to let it show though, however it doesn't always work as she has some visual ticks that show this off. She hates being isolated, and loves talking to people. She craves social interaction and is out of the house more times then not. In fact, she isn't in her apartment all that often, so it tends to be fairly neat, though a bit dusty.

Personality Quirks: When she gets nervous, she scratches her arms a lot. She also tends to be very touchy-feely
Likes: Physical Contact, people, power, life, death of non-powered
Dislikes: Lack of people in an area, death of friends and family, non-powered people, an over-abundance of nature(forests are a good example)
Motivations: To see Gesellschaft achieve their end goals, and murder as many - This sentence is cut off - You may either fix it or delete it as you see fit.
Fears: Herself dieing, Torture, Earthquakes


Home Town: Toronto(lives in California)
Character History: (Optional) - Please remove this.


Face Claim: Lina Inverse(Slayers)
Voice Claim: (What will your character sound like!? Optional but adds a whole new dimension to your RP.) -Please remove this and either add a VC or simply put N/A

I also suggest a quick grammar and spelling check throughout the app, though this is not required as it is still readable.

After these few issues are resolved, you will be ready to be approved fully. If you have any questions or concerns, PM me here or on Discord.

Issues have been addressed, welcome to Jeweled Seas and enjoy your stay: If you have any questions or need help, feel free to message a member of the Administrative Team directly such as me and we will do our best to help you.

Melony wrote:

Full Name:Melony porter
Alias/Epithet:Elemelon
Age:19
Gender:female
Race:(Human)
Sexuality:Bi
Origin: Canada, currently lives in the USA
Affiliation: Gesellschaft
Classifications:
+Main: Blaster
+Secondary: Shaker
+Third: Brute



General Appearance:
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Blue(red contacts)
Skin Tone: Pale skin
Height:5 foot 8
Weight:150 lbs
Tattoo:N/A



Personality:Melony’s personality comes down to raw emotion. She says what she feels and has no shame in it. She can only lie if she absolutely has to, and has no fear of the repercussions if she’s talking to someone randomly on the street. She isn’t an asshole, however, as she usually has nice things to say. Usually. If you get on her bad side she will insult you at every given chance, and it's not hard to do that. However she won't hate everyone forever, and it's fairly easy to get back to her good side. The same goes for her being nice: It's easy to get on her bad side. Of course, there are always exceptions to the rule, but mostly this is the norm.

She is in good physical shape due to morning jogs, which she does everyday on the same route without fail. She tends to get nervous, but it only happens a bit more than the average person. She tries not to let it show though, however it doesn't always work as she has some visual ticks that show this off. She hates being isolated and loves talking to people. She craves social interaction and is out of the house more times than not. In fact, she isn't in her apartment all that often, so it tends to be fairly neat, though a bit dusty.

Personality Quirks: When she gets nervous, she scratches her arms a lot. She also tends to be very touchy-feely
Likes: Physical Contact, people, power, life, death of non-powered
Dislikes: Lack of people in an area, death of friends and family, non-powered people, an over-abundance of nature(forests are a good example)
Motivations: To see Gesellschaft achieve their end goals and murder as many nonpowered individuals as possible
Fears: Herself dying, Torture, Earthquakes


Home Town: Toronto(lives in California)


Face Claim: Lina Inverse(Slayers)
Voice Claim: N/A

Moved back to WIP per user request.

Edits have been approved.

Melony wrote:

Full Name:Melony porter
Alias/Epithet:Elemelon
Age:19
Gender:female
Race:(Human)
Sexuality:Bi
Origin: Canada, currently lives in the USA
Affiliation: Gesellschaft
Classifications:
+Main: Blaster
+Secondary: Shaker
+Third: Striker



General Appearance:
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Blue(red contacts)
Skin Tone: Pale skin
Height:5 foot 8
Weight:150 lbs
Tattoo:N/A



Personality:Melony’s personality comes down to raw emotion. She says what she feels and has no shame in it. She can only lie if she absolutely has to, and has no fear of the repercussions if she’s talking to someone randomly on the street. She isn’t an asshole, however, as she usually has nice things to say. Usually. If you get on her bad side she will insult you at every given chance, and it's not hard to do that. However she won't hate everyone forever, and it's fairly easy to get back to her good side. The same goes for her being nice: It's easy to get on her bad side. Of course, there are always exceptions to the rule, but mostly this is the norm.

She is in good physical shape due to morning jogs, which she does everyday on the same route without fail. She tends to get nervous, but it only happens a bit more than the average person. She tries not to let it show though, however it doesn't always work as she has some visual ticks that show this off. She hates being isolated and loves talking to people. She craves social interaction and is out of the house more times than not. In fact, she isn't in her apartment all that often, so it tends to be fairly neat, though a bit dusty.

Personality Quirks: When she gets nervous, she scratches her arms a lot. She also tends to be very touchy-feely
Likes: Physical Contact, people, power, life, death of non-powered
Dislikes: Lack of people in an area, death of friends and family, non-powered people, an over-abundance of nature(forests are a good example)
Motivations: To see Gesellschaft achieve their end goals and murder as many nonpowered individuals as possible
Fears: Herself dying, Torture, Earthquakes


Home Town: Toronto(lives in California)


Face Claim: Lina Inverse(Slayers)
Voice Claim: N/A