Heartsmith
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| Subject: Warrior Defenders Thu Sep 29, 2016 4:47 pm | |
| Attachment Name: Warrior Defenders Type: Armor Class: F Length: Short shoulder to neck. Weight: 30 lbs. Description: These shoulder pads can help the weakest to top tier pirates across the sea. It is said that even vikings used to wear them in their time. When things get rough these sturdy yet fashionable pieces of armor can come to your aid. Strengths: More defense in the user's upper waist. Can hold damage from F Class Weapons. Sturdy againsts bullets. Weaknesses: Slows down user by a considerable amount. Only covers shoulder area. Higher tier skills or weapons can break it with relatively more ease.
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Synthia First Generation
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| Subject: Re: Warrior Defenders Fri Sep 30, 2016 2:30 am | |
| Hey there, this piece of equipment looks nearly good to go, I only have a few requests to make in regards to changing things: 1. Please refer to the Equipment Template, at least two strengths and three weaknesses are required - but seeing as this is a Class F equipment they don't have to be anything too severe, examples of weaknesses and strengths could be something akin to the following: - Example:
Strengths:
- Able to withstand D or F tier attacks without breaking
- Low form-factor and type of armor makes it easier to keep on the user's person when compared to a full-body set, gauntlet, or chest-piece.
Weaknesses:
- (As you stated) Heavy, requiring a strength of __ tier to use or cannot be used with __ tier velocity.
- Does not provide full protection as a complete set of armor would.
Of course, these are not the items that I am requiring you to place within your description and I encourage you to be as creative as possible, even with lower tiered armor such as this. 2. Also please note if they effect any Rumble System stats or base stats (See the new updates for details on the Rumble System if you missed it) Other than these small changes, your armor is looking good thus far! | |
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Heartsmith
Berries : 1,000,000 Posts : 229
Skill Sheet Skill 1: Merman Combat Skill 2: From The Depths Skill 3: Poseidon's Judgement
| Subject: Re: Warrior Defenders Fri Sep 30, 2016 4:07 pm | |
| Alrighty then, do forgive me for that one just came back to the site after being away for a few weeks or a whole month maybe and might've rushed back in with this and didn't add much. And no i didn't knew about the new rumble system but did read over it right now since you mentioned it, Am a bit confused on how it works but I will look more into it though. Finished adding more weakness and strengths and thanks for pointing out what needed to be done. | |
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Synthia First Generation
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| Subject: Re: Warrior Defenders Fri Sep 30, 2016 7:43 pm | |
| Everything looks fine now - Unless anyone else sees a problem with this: APPROVED! - Heartsmith wrote:
Attachment Name: Warrior Defenders Type: Armor Class: F Length: Short shoulder to neck. Weight: 30 lbs. Description: These shoulder pads can help the weakest to top tier pirates across the sea. It is said that even vikings used to wear them in their time. When things get rough these sturdy yet fashionable pieces of armor can come to your aid.
Strengths: More defense in the user's upper waist. Can hold damage from F Class Weapons. Sturdy againsts bullets.
Weaknesses: Slows down user by a considerable amount. Only covers shoulder area. Higher tier skills or weapons can break it with relatively more ease.
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